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NWOK
NWOKLv44yr
2020-10-24 17:35

At the Chapter 40 it's good and chichè is keep at minimum but after 40 Chapter it becomes all chichè and idiot mc. First of all he doesn't learn about this WORLD he doesn't even know abcd of this world even after 58 Chapters, he just ask his friends. as for chichè? after 40 Chapter it increasing it 100% rate. Let's see Last Chapter 50-60 he goes to find his friends guess what he is being bullied, he beat them, guess what, his big brother come, guess what he again beat them, they are going to village ,guess what they meet bandit, they reach the village, guess what village is being attack.

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JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15

Thanks. Hate this cliche reliance. Will skip

4yr
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SavageGamer
SavageGamerLv14

guess what I am skipping this story. Xd

4yr
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younes31
younes31Lv4

,gff

4yr
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somtoo_obiakor
somtoo_obiakorLv3

really

4yr
3
Bamse_Esmab
Bamse_EsmabLv3

The story showed some promise early on but quickly became very cliche reliant and he progressed way too quickly. This story is obviously going to end with him as maybe the supreme leader of the entire world or something.

4yr
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Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

thank you for saving me from frustation young taoist

4yr
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Connoisseur
ConnoisseurLv3

Thanks for explanation Sir!

Bamse_Esmab:The story showed some promise early on but quickly became very cliche reliant and he progressed way too quickly. This story is obviously going to end with him as maybe the supreme leader of the entire world or something.
4yr
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Ewit
EwitLv3

Couldn't agree more. Even after 200+ chapter, the only memorable and worthy things is the dead of ol' president. The rest. MC become the villain and robbing the whole empire.

4yr
4
NomNomCorp_
NomNomCorp_Lv14

f8wbcqb hi chqc8w7dd8wc8 dw fbjd I is wanted did don't have a problem at this point is that you have a job and a good example to the body and the other side is that

4yr
VenerableAnnLust
VenerableAnnLustLv6

That's basically all of the novels. After u read 3-4 novels u bcom intolerant.

4yr
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NamelessKing
NamelessKingLv4

!!

3yr
NamelessKing
NamelessKingLv4

2

3yr
Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

Then guess what, he found an old grandpa soul(who know everything) that just happen to be related to his newly found bloodline, then guess what, he find a weaken (powerful bloodline)beast fight with other to protect it youth, and just happen to become the master of the beast child. then guess what, a beast tide that is so powerful just so happen as he was planning to return from the beast forest., then guess what, he become a hero who save the weak people who was block outside the city wall for free (when he was in the beast forest, he once plan to save other only when they are almost dead to rep the most benefit, he actually plan to wait until one party die to step in to rep all the benefit), so this is just a complete character break from cunning to naive character mode.

3yr
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KingQue2005
KingQue2005Lv12

ur thinking hella smol bro. its actually worth it. think of these chapters as a really long synopsis. the true story has yet to even begin.

Bamse_Esmab:The story showed some promise early on but quickly became very cliche reliant and he progressed way too quickly. This story is obviously going to end with him as maybe the supreme leader of the entire world or something.
2yr
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

People like you make me think if being a psychopath and going on a killing spree is even wrong at all. Or is it a action so helpful to others that going to heavens is almost confirmed.

KingQue2005:ur thinking hella smol bro. its actually worth it. think of these chapters as a really long synopsis. the true story has yet to even begin.
1yr
Eliel_Pereira
Eliel_PereiraLv2

It's a very good novel, don't believe this guy.

2mth
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mithun
mithunLv12

after reading 60 chapters writing quality: author is definitely newbie.skipping most of interesting part like picking loot after fight.after a fight system will pick one or two basic attributes and there is also a ding in Last sentence , we think there is a big loot in next chapter but when reading next chapter we feel like it was some other novel bcoz the story move forward few months. story: transmigrates to a orphan , getting system,joining royal academy, problem with noble silk pants..bla...bla.. there is no concept about system like what triggers attributes pickup.we only know he get everything when he wanted eg: he first get magic spell. he can't use it because no magic. after few paragraphs (not chapters) he get magic attributes drop. he get meditation skill he has no talent..after few para..he picked up superior talent. he get red dragon aura technique ..don't have red dragon blood line to practice it.. after few paragraphs he get high quality red dragon blood line. he can get every drop just walking near people..no need to fight / need time. just like that. conclusion: for a light read it's more than good. even it's break our commonsense sometimes.if it's selected I still mostly read it until it breaks my brain completely.

4yr

TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

First! (Will alter review after reading if needed) Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!

4yr
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

Read it on Comrademao and it's not that good to be honest, iit's just one of those 'popcorn' novel which focuses on trash lottery system after 100 chapters, MC can also pick bloodline but even though it could sstrengthen him by at lwast 1% he deems them too weak, at some point he find a bloodline at the level of his others bloodline but he forget about it even though he could have a huge backing with it. Ans in the end, even if he had a backing, it would be useless since even toward the middle/end(I stopped at around 360) MC is still at the noob realm even though he has the strength of a god anld could easily go to the Outer World to become stronger faster... There's also the deal with his pets which are totally forgotten after 10 chapters..

4yr
Aswong
AswongLv13

Webnovel pick good novel for trial read and literally choose the worst one in the bin to approve. Who the **** approve this novels? Why always pick the least viable ones to earn coins and the most likely to be dropped?. Seriously someone should get fired. It is a really waste of money.

4yr
ZxeilosS
ZxeilosSLv5

Already read this one on another site so i am 100% sure this is another failure novel of newbie author........ well at least first 200 chapters are readable but after that even the cheat (about attribute picking) become unnessary and it main focus is about like low quality lottery system novel.....

4yr
DarkEdenGod
DarkEdenGodLv11

Why was did chosen/picked????? Do people really use coins for this?? Need answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answers

4yr
Over_Lord_9904
Over_Lord_9904Lv5

Dude read it at comrade mao it was really good at first but then it turn trash after he figured out the universe was going end and be reborn again

4yr
BobKenton
BobKentonLv13

Cliché af. Plot armor is very obvious as he gets things right when he needs it. To me the world building isn't realistic at all, imagine if there were a group of people you thought less of gaining higher status and power like if there were African aristocrats in the 1700s. It is painfully obvious that there won't be much setbacks for mc and he would just continue getting more op without much work.

4yr
qisbooboo
qisboobooLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
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