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mithun
mithunLv124yr
2020-10-24 11:10

after reading 60 chapters writing quality: author is definitely newbie.skipping most of interesting part like picking loot after fight.after a fight system will pick one or two basic attributes and there is also a ding in Last sentence , we think there is a big loot in next chapter but when reading next chapter we feel like it was some other novel bcoz the story move forward few months. story: transmigrates to a orphan , getting system,joining royal academy, problem with noble silk pants..bla...bla.. there is no concept about system like what triggers attributes pickup.we only know he get everything when he wanted eg: he first get magic spell. he can't use it because no magic. after few paragraphs (not chapters) he get magic attributes drop. he get meditation skill he has no talent..after few para..he picked up superior talent. he get red dragon aura technique ..don't have red dragon blood line to practice it.. after few paragraphs he get high quality red dragon blood line. he can get every drop just walking near people..no need to fight / need time. just like that. conclusion: for a light read it's more than good. even it's break our commonsense sometimes.if it's selected I still mostly read it until it breaks my brain completely.

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Panda Reunion
4.1
431 Chs

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ForFunWorld
ForFunWorldLv13

Its doesn't seem interesting..

4yr
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mithun
mithunLv12

you can spend some time.. nothing more..

ForFunWorld:Its doesn't seem interesting..
4yr
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ImJustQ
ImJustQLv13

it's not a bad story definitely sped up and def not using coins after only 30 chapters

4yr
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Deku46
Deku46Lv5

I feel this story is how we wish life was, don't have it, next moment you got it, I think it's supposed to hit that little desire.

ImJustQ:it's not a bad story definitely sped up and def not using coins after only 30 chapters
4yr
22
Deku46
Deku46Lv5

also feels like it doesn't wanna waste time with bullshit so it ends up missing the actual story, but that's not bad, sometimes you don't wanna read a story, sometimes one wants to just chill.

ImJustQ:it's not a bad story definitely sped up and def not using coins after only 30 chapters
4yr
15
Darkload
DarkloadLv13

I enjoyed the novel but after i MTLed the full novel i got to say -don't read this novel- they skipped a lot and left a lot of plot holes so i would like to let others know not to read this if they care about all the plot holes and the rushed story half way into the novel

4yr
14
mehrnush
mehrnushLv5

mc is kinda brainless 😒

4yr
5
alanuniq
alanuniqLv15

Thanks for your extensive review !

4yr
4
Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv13

Hey. Is the story a harem?

Darkload:I enjoyed the novel but after i MTLed the full novel i got to say -don't read this novel- they skipped a lot and left a lot of plot holes so i would like to let others know not to read this if they care about all the plot holes and the rushed story half way into the novel
4yr
Sanshire
SanshireLv11

bruh, your review reads like a 3 star score, which is average. certainly not the 4.5 that you gave it, which is damn near perfect.

4yr
9
Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4

This sounds more like a negative review but you gave it a 4.5...

4yr
5
VoiD_dEmOn
VoiD_dEmOnLv11

well he gave it 4.5 because this novel is more like a fanfics or wish fulfilling type. and its good for those who wants some time passing novel and it is good at that except their r too many plot holes. But If you read all your favourite books and looking for some new books this novel is good for some time pass .

4yr
5
Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

novel has interesting concept but.... ....

4yr
Darkload
DarkloadLv13

nope last i checked there is no Romance at all ----spoiler---- He becomes the Creator in the last chapter and it just ends there after saying he feels that there are other Creators out side of the universe he is in

Muthoni_Murira:Hey. Is the story a harem?
4yr
2
Darkload
DarkloadLv13

just google the novel im sure you can find the rest :)

Deku46:I feel this story is how we wish life was, don't have it, next moment you got it, I think it's supposed to hit that little desire.
4yr
Pksr
PksrLv15

well the gif is awesome

4yr
3
AiNz
AiNzLv10

So basically, mc is loved by destiny. Fate Gu?..i guess..The first immortal Venerable.

4yr
4
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

Not even good for a "light read"

4yr
ANDRGENOUS
ANDRGENOUSLv4

Well I have finished the novel in mtl, the mc is broken(super op mc) he will later go to higher planes to pick up more attributes and in the end he just basically beats the final boss in the last highest plane then he became the final boss.

4yr
Cut_Ara
Cut_AraLv3

uwu

4yr
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NWOK
NWOKLv4

At the Chapter 40 it's good and chichè is keep at minimum but after 40 Chapter it becomes all chichè and idiot mc. First of all he doesn't learn about this WORLD he doesn't even know abcd of this world even after 58 Chapters, he just ask his friends. as for chichè? after 40 Chapter it increasing it 100% rate. Let's see Last Chapter 50-60 he goes to find his friends guess what he is being bullied, he beat them, guess what, his big brother come, guess what he again beat them, they are going to village ,guess what they meet bandit, they reach the village, guess what village is being attack.

4yr

TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

First! (Will alter review after reading if needed) Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!Wordcount!

4yr
XinYuhao
XinYuhaoLv4

Read it on Comrademao and it's not that good to be honest, iit's just one of those 'popcorn' novel which focuses on trash lottery system after 100 chapters, MC can also pick bloodline but even though it could sstrengthen him by at lwast 1% he deems them too weak, at some point he find a bloodline at the level of his others bloodline but he forget about it even though he could have a huge backing with it. Ans in the end, even if he had a backing, it would be useless since even toward the middle/end(I stopped at around 360) MC is still at the noob realm even though he has the strength of a god anld could easily go to the Outer World to become stronger faster... There's also the deal with his pets which are totally forgotten after 10 chapters..

4yr
Aswong
AswongLv13

Webnovel pick good novel for trial read and literally choose the worst one in the bin to approve. Who the **** approve this novels? Why always pick the least viable ones to earn coins and the most likely to be dropped?. Seriously someone should get fired. It is a really waste of money.

4yr
ZxeilosS
ZxeilosSLv5

Already read this one on another site so i am 100% sure this is another failure novel of newbie author........ well at least first 200 chapters are readable but after that even the cheat (about attribute picking) become unnessary and it main focus is about like low quality lottery system novel.....

4yr
DarkEdenGod
DarkEdenGodLv11

Why was did chosen/picked????? Do people really use coins for this?? Need answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answersNeed answers

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Over_Lord_9904
Over_Lord_9904Lv5

Dude read it at comrade mao it was really good at first but then it turn trash after he figured out the universe was going end and be reborn again

4yr
BobKenton
BobKentonLv13

Cliché af. Plot armor is very obvious as he gets things right when he needs it. To me the world building isn't realistic at all, imagine if there were a group of people you thought less of gaining higher status and power like if there were African aristocrats in the 1700s. It is painfully obvious that there won't be much setbacks for mc and he would just continue getting more op without much work.

4yr
qisbooboo
qisboobooLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
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