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qisbooboo
qisboobooLv54yr
2020-11-01 10:28

Can’t get past the first couple chapters. Already glaring flaws in the story. MC during a beast tide picks up attributes and instantly becomes trainee level warrior. Literally at the same time people are like go back inside MANY times but then the author skips over and he ends up at battlefield. Also dumb how he doesn’t have to be near a beast or anyone really to pickup stuff. Magical fire wolf drops orb and he picks it up. It gives him magic fire ball skill cause of course. And then you have the shock oh wow didn’t know the scrawny kid could kill a wolf reactions. Also remember supposed to be a deadly beast tide, but he could leisurely think while everyone around him is telling him to go back. Andyeah just overall poorly done kinda annoying to read.

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ziven
zivenLv4

my love

akserhy
akserhyLv14

yep. Agreed with all the points ya mentioned .😔

qisbooboo
qisboobooLv5

Sad thing is the premise could work, but it’s just so poorly executed 😭 and it was immediately followed by like 7-8 other rip offs of this already poor story :(

akserhy:yep. Agreed with all the points ya mentioned .😔
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