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Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv154yr
2020-09-25 03:47

I have read my fare share of trash and this is among the top, wonderful premise and the author took a hot and scalding dump on it, don't waste your time.

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Great_Reader
Great_ReaderLv2

You're the fucking trash! This novel is pretty good at all.

Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv15

trash recognizes trash so I know what I'm talking about according to you😘

Great_Reader:You're the fucking trash! This novel is pretty good at all.
Great_Reader
Great_ReaderLv2

You're really a trash, especially to society. No wonder you're toxic in the internet. Your taste is also trash. This novel is for people with good sense not trash like you but nevermind.

Ouranos_Gein:trash recognizes trash so I know what I'm talking about according to you😘
Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv15

Now you're tripping ryt?😂😂😂😂😂😂

Great_Reader:You're really a trash, especially to society. No wonder you're toxic in the internet. Your taste is also trash. This novel is for people with good sense not trash like you but nevermind.
Great_Reader
Great_ReaderLv2

Nah, I'm busy reading, I will reply only twice and won't respond anymore since this is the internet and whatever you say, suck it up.

Ouranos_Gein:Now you're tripping ryt?😂😂😂😂😂😂
SkyAboveTheSky
SkyAboveTheSkyLv5

it's actually pretty bad and generic, same old stuff with twists here and there which barely makes it any better. Writing style and overall it's meh, I even left a short review with points I found bad

Fachi
FachiLv1

You're being 10 times as toxic

Great_Reader:You're really a trash, especially to society. No wonder you're toxic in the internet. Your taste is also trash. This novel is for people with good sense not trash like you but nevermind.
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AnthonyCerbic
AnthonyCerbicLv5

TL;DR - great premise, ******* execution. I agree on "hidden gem" assessment with other reviewers. This novel definitely stands aside from many cookie cutter xianxia on this site. As for genre, I'd say it is a xianxia/mystery with a slight transmigration twist. Now, is the novel good? I am... rather conflicted. On one hand, I read all the 60 chapters available in one sitting and am even so impressed I am writing this review, so its definitely not trash. On the other hand I find myself not adding the novel to my library - after getting a solid taste of what is it like I am just not very exciting for the next chapter. Writing quality is average. It could be the author is just trying to imitate (poorly written and translated) xianxia novels, and this is causing his own prose to be generic and uninspiring. It definitely has that cultivation aftertaste - phrases like "boundless heavens", "with a flick of wrist" etc. being peppered all over the chapters. It doesn't quite go down to "repeating explanations several times in a row" type of bad, but still there's much to improve in pure technical writing aspect. For the story, the only good thing for me is mystery. I would honestly like to know how and who is behind the transmigration and fall of Heaven. So, the premise of the story is 5/5, I was hooked from the begging. But again, while the premise is great, the main body of story is disappointing. Its... slap-dash? Uneven, unstructured. Events just happen, it seems - enemies and allies are revealed spontaneously and just as easily discarded. The tone is inconsistent too - at a certain point it was nearly a slice of life comedy! It definitely feels like the writer is making stuff up as he goes, without deeper consideration - so if the writer isn't caring about his world building, why should I?

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