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Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv124yr
2020-09-18 00:57

Welp, Shamefull author here. Hope you guys will enjoy the story, the premise is that of transmigration to a game like world. This is NOT a “Virtual reality” novel, this is a Fantasy one. The protagonist is OP, So there’s that, for those who don’t like a strong mc since the start, this is not for you. And yes, I suppose I should mention that this is not a typical Xianxia novel with people courting death at every turn, the main plot is not the cultivation journey of the MC, the story follows the protagonist on his journey for answers. Well With that being said I sincerly hope you guys enjoy!

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Bagoury
BagouryLv14

mad respect for u man!!! this is absolutely a hidden gem... plz continue and dont drop it has become my favorite for its uniqueness

Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv12

Thank you very much for your kind words! Seeing people enjoy the work is one Of my main motivations to keep on writing. ))

Bagoury:mad respect for u man!!! this is absolutely a hidden gem... plz continue and dont drop it has become my favorite for its uniqueness
WriterSovereign
WriterSovereignLv2

you should add tags author

Conquerer007
Conquerer007Lv2

Author this novel is a gem but i would request you to please not add harem or romance in it. Nearly all novels out there follow some sort of heavenly law that protagonist must have a female lead so please let this be the one of the unique ones.

Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv12

You can rest assured I am not planning to add any harem to the story as I do not trust my capabilities in Writing an actual well written one. As for romance no plans for it as of yet either.

Conquerer007:Author this novel is a gem but i would request you to please not add harem or romance in it. Nearly all novels out there follow some sort of heavenly law that protagonist must have a female lead so please let this be the one of the unique ones.
Thanara
ThanaraLv4

Just want to clarify.. is that cultivation levels we're based from the game immortal taoist? Their are certainly similarities!!

Thanara
ThanaraLv4

Just want to clarify.. is that cultivation levels we're based from the game immortal taoist? Their are certainly similarities!!

Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv12

Yup, I mainly started the novel after being inspired from the game ))

Thanara:Just want to clarify.. is that cultivation levels we're based from the game immortal taoist? Their are certainly similarities!!
Thanara
ThanaraLv4

Waaah really?! It feels wonderful knowing someone who plays that game as well 😃 been playing it for almost a year now 😍

Immortal_Simo:Yup, I mainly started the novel after being inspired from the game ))
reliczexide
reliczexideLv4

Check!!!

Kausik_Boruah
Kausik_BoruahLv10

I love this novel

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AnthonyCerbic
AnthonyCerbicLv5

TL;DR - great premise, ******* execution. I agree on "hidden gem" assessment with other reviewers. This novel definitely stands aside from many cookie cutter xianxia on this site. As for genre, I'd say it is a xianxia/mystery with a slight transmigration twist. Now, is the novel good? I am... rather conflicted. On one hand, I read all the 60 chapters available in one sitting and am even so impressed I am writing this review, so its definitely not trash. On the other hand I find myself not adding the novel to my library - after getting a solid taste of what is it like I am just not very exciting for the next chapter. Writing quality is average. It could be the author is just trying to imitate (poorly written and translated) xianxia novels, and this is causing his own prose to be generic and uninspiring. It definitely has that cultivation aftertaste - phrases like "boundless heavens", "with a flick of wrist" etc. being peppered all over the chapters. It doesn't quite go down to "repeating explanations several times in a row" type of bad, but still there's much to improve in pure technical writing aspect. For the story, the only good thing for me is mystery. I would honestly like to know how and who is behind the transmigration and fall of Heaven. So, the premise of the story is 5/5, I was hooked from the begging. But again, while the premise is great, the main body of story is disappointing. Its... slap-dash? Uneven, unstructured. Events just happen, it seems - enemies and allies are revealed spontaneously and just as easily discarded. The tone is inconsistent too - at a certain point it was nearly a slice of life comedy! It definitely feels like the writer is making stuff up as he goes, without deeper consideration - so if the writer isn't caring about his world building, why should I?

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