I'm not sure why people are falsely giving this good ratings than it actually deserves, are their standards so low? I read 50chap which are free before deciding to stop wasting my time with this. Chapters have so many errors, inconsistencies, grammar, spellings which breaks your immersion, even with readers pointing them out in paragraph comments Author didn't feel the need to fix it, shows much he cares about it. Author sometimes say MC use mana then in next paragraph it's Qi. What?? "I have eyes but failed to see mount tai" typical Chinese saying, tell me is there a mount tai in that game world? if not why did someone from that world say it? it feels so wrong. MC and his friends goes on calling each other brother, brother, brother it's super awkward. His friend spend thousands of years in game before MCs arrival yet there's no visible changes in his personality, he acts like a child along with MC and emotional moments are so forced. Author uses CAPITALS to convey emotions are screaming/anger instead of describing them, feels like it's written by a school kid. Story isn't original either, just another isekai but worse with chinese copy paste. The way they use "hidden" expert and other bs is just ugggh.
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LIKEAlso let me add how POV keeps changing so fast. It's Meh.
thanks for saving me time bruv, i hate trying to read new novel only to realise it is just waste of time with weak plot and writing that offers nothing but occasional self satisfaction
can you review mine whenever you have time? aspiring author here and needs your brutal honesty to keep improving. God Must Be Lazy. I hope you can endure until around chapter 70 on the first arc.
