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Charlottes
CharlottesLv134yr
2020-09-17 15:20

To be honest I wasn't supposed to read this because of the lack of chapters and the title, here I thought it would be like those Xianxia sh*ts but then I accidentally tapped this novel by accident since I'm using a mobile, thus since I was bored and nothing to read then I continued reading this...at first this novel Entrance was serious. almost the same as Overlord (Anime) but there are just similarities but when I continued to read till Chapter 3 I got hooked this kind of novel is a gem! glad I accidentally tapped this novel or else it would be left unread in my Library since I've already booked marked it even without reading it.

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Draconis0kelly
Draconis0kellyLv15

check out immortal wine

Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

so mean, immortal wine stopped updating after ch 49

Draconis0kelly:check out immortal wine
Draconis0kelly
Draconis0kellyLv15

its being republished with a ghost writer working with the original author. give it a couple weeks should be caught up. the rewrite is at the end of the thirtys

Circlethatone:so mean, immortal wine stopped updating after ch 49
Draconis0kelly
Draconis0kellyLv15

look for the second one

Circlethatone:so mean, immortal wine stopped updating after ch 49
ViniDrako23
ViniDrako23Lv4

The Mc is op? Have Harém or Romance?

Charlottes
CharlottesLv13

The Mc Is OP, as for harem or romance... it's unknown, so far haven't seen the MC interest in women.

ViniDrako23:The Mc is op? Have Harém or Romance?
XEmaly
XEmalyLv2

Quando vai ser a próxima atualização?

Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv12

Todos os dias um capítulo

XEmaly:Quando vai ser a próxima atualização?
Zoro_The_Dark
Zoro_The_DarkLv3

Please read my novel 'HEAVENS SLAYER' you'll like it for sure

Wxlliam
WxlliamLv13

this is just like the manga tsoyukute new saga

Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

I found it! Thanks brother!

Draconis0kelly:look for the second one
FoolishCat
FoolishCatLv2

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HandsomeMadman
HandsomeMadmanLv10

is this a harem? please say no. does the bai clan girl end up with him? say noooo!!

thescorpiona
thescorpionaLv14

cant find it[img=update]

Draconis0kelly:check out immortal wine
Immortal_Simo
Immortal_SimoLv12

No

HandsomeMadman:is this a harem? please say no. does the bai clan girl end up with him? say noooo!!
NyankoDan
NyankoDanLv13

Theres a cat though

Charlottes:The Mc Is OP, as for harem or romance... it's unknown, so far haven't seen the MC interest in women.
Chaossin
ChaossinLv14

DOPE

Charlottes:The Mc Is OP, as for harem or romance... it's unknown, so far haven't seen the MC interest in women.
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AnthonyCerbic
AnthonyCerbicLv5

TL;DR - great premise, ******* execution. I agree on "hidden gem" assessment with other reviewers. This novel definitely stands aside from many cookie cutter xianxia on this site. As for genre, I'd say it is a xianxia/mystery with a slight transmigration twist. Now, is the novel good? I am... rather conflicted. On one hand, I read all the 60 chapters available in one sitting and am even so impressed I am writing this review, so its definitely not trash. On the other hand I find myself not adding the novel to my library - after getting a solid taste of what is it like I am just not very exciting for the next chapter. Writing quality is average. It could be the author is just trying to imitate (poorly written and translated) xianxia novels, and this is causing his own prose to be generic and uninspiring. It definitely has that cultivation aftertaste - phrases like "boundless heavens", "with a flick of wrist" etc. being peppered all over the chapters. It doesn't quite go down to "repeating explanations several times in a row" type of bad, but still there's much to improve in pure technical writing aspect. For the story, the only good thing for me is mystery. I would honestly like to know how and who is behind the transmigration and fall of Heaven. So, the premise of the story is 5/5, I was hooked from the begging. But again, while the premise is great, the main body of story is disappointing. Its... slap-dash? Uneven, unstructured. Events just happen, it seems - enemies and allies are revealed spontaneously and just as easily discarded. The tone is inconsistent too - at a certain point it was nearly a slice of life comedy! It definitely feels like the writer is making stuff up as he goes, without deeper consideration - so if the writer isn't caring about his world building, why should I?

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