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Quarantined_Soul
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2021-08-31 22:08

hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel. pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent. to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes. 2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting. 3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble. 4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype. cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow. 2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself. 3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.

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Quarantined_Soul
Quarantined_SoulLv3

again, let me emphasize, The plot is very intelligent and interesting but Mc's power growth is extremely slow.

Deathy_70
Deathy_70Lv3

Indeed, that's my only issues with this novel.

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The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!

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