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Read untill 7th chapter. World description is good. Story is good. CRİTİCİSM------------ The only problem is interactions. Mc seems to have no goals . İn the early chapters he wanted to be somthing more than a normal person with no purpose. But in the end of the day what he says and what he does are different. He became a "loyal" soldier with no own motives other then the fire nation itself. He became so selfles. And dont use the word "loyal" too much it started to sound like a dogs loyalty to its owners. Thats it it ,it has potantial. Keep up the story.
Too busy reading
Good
Good start
İf its short 100 is good if the chapters are long i could read 50 or so
İf he hurry he could save raphatalias friends in dungeon
USA is at it again.