Story was fine until for some reason the mc takes over Harry’s body and his fiancé bellatrix idk what happened since I dropped it... was dumb and a waste to read
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It’s a multiple different Harry potters world story going for multiverse travel. I do what I want.
Should’ve put a tag for that then idk
You should tag your story properly and write an actual synopsis then.
Although it is a little confusing in that arc but it was explained later that he can takeover bodies in alternative hp universes(His real body is intact and can just merge the abilities of new body to the old one) and the story really gets interesting after that if you continue, it's just confusing for like 2 or so chapters in that arc.
Just don’t see the point of the early chapters then lol he could’ve just reincarnate as Harry Potter and it be an AU where bellatrix is young or something.... all of the early chapters seem pointless because why bother being reborn in an earlier era as someone else entirely?
I think it was just to make mc op and have a world where he is the total boss plus he could still take items from that world so it could still be utilized though i agree author could have exploited the first world more but it's still early in the story so i will not comment on that, maybe author has some plans for that. And maybe i am being biased here because of the release rate, i still think new readers should read this story. Author is releasing like 10 chapters daily that alone is a huge plus point in my book and i don't think story has a flaw big enough to ignore that advantage. I mean the mc is op, goes to different hp worlds (including fan-fic ones that means huge scope for the plot as many fan-fic authors really went crazy with their stories.), and does not follow the canon. Tbh these 3 points alone are more than enough for me to like the story XD.
Same issue, so I guess this one isn't for me.
so what your saying is, you write whatever you want and when something is WAY different than the original story you just call it a different world?
That’s usually how fan fictions work?
first one i have seen to have multiple of the same world
??? Never seen the Nasuverse, Marvel Universe or even fanfics like Grandpa Universe or Super Dimensional Guild then? Or literally any novel with an 'earth' in it? They are all the same 'world' just with alternate history or things added to them, this novel, mutant obscurus gamer, grandpa universe etc all have multiple versions of Harry Potter visited, some with dark lord dumbles, some with senile dumbles and some with good misguided dumbles for example. (Although obscurus has multiple marvel versions instead of HP ones since HP power level is low af when it's a mixed world)
