It's a diary of how the author wished it happened rather than a story. There are even chapters where no one speaks and the progression is too fast and totally trash. He only says "We did this and that, now we are a happy family" instead of making it really happen. Wish Fulfillment diary ... The worst fanfic I read until now
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Isn't that what fanfiction is?
I'm talking about the writing style and not the content...for a real author a writing style like that is unforgivable....
Jake_Knight:Isn't that what fanfiction is?
Still kind of too serious, still, unforgivable? You act like he did a serious crime, it's not that serious, just move on to a new story if you hate it, plenty of stories to go by.
Read ch 22 and you know what i mean...I would say that I at least know what's good after reading Novels for 4 Years and thousands of chapters and the writing style here is unbearable....if you like it, then it's good for you, but the majority won't (and that comes from someone, who is reading almost every half of a novel on lnmtl or comrademao because it isn't translated yet)
Jake_Knight:Still kind of too serious, still, unforgivable? You act like he did a serious crime, it's not that serious, just move on to a new story if you hate it, plenty of stories to go by.
