HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error.

1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have

My main problem with this novel is the main character. To put it bluntly he is a retard. He is a transmigrator so don't give me the "but he is still 11 years old and is weak" I do not hate the fact that he knows nothing of the HP world in fact I love it as I am sick and tired of fanfic MCs doing the same thing over and over because they have meta knowledge but what I have issues with is his stupidity. In the early chapters he is a street urchin with a 4 year old sister but then instead of doing whatever is necessary so he and his sister would survive and be safe the retarded son of gun decided that holding on to his modern day saintly morals is the right thing to do. They are struggling but instead of using the money to at least secure themselves he donates it to charity and orphanages like wtf also even if he is an average joe, the mere fact that he came from the modern world already gave him innate advantages even I could think of a few things that would earn me enough money to at least not live in the streets. At least until the chapter where I stopped he feels like a brainless character being dragged around by the plot, he doesn't take charge of his and his sister's life sustained by his massive plot armor. In summary, he is like a classic JP isekai MC. If it were any other person they would have long been taken advantage of as they won't suddenly have a thief who was angry at them for stealing in their territory as their teacher for stealing because coincidentally they lack a partner. He complains that his sufferings are unfair which in fact if only he stopped and thought about what he was going to do for a while he could have totally avoided the shit he finds himself in. If his attitude changes in the future or he remains as a retard then tell me. I can't bring myself to read a story following someone like this even if he becomes overpowered in the future what is the use when it all comes down to plot convenience and luck. The thing that drew me to LoTM is the sheer effort Klein had to do with the hand he is dealt with, he thinks and thinks as one wrong step he could die, I think the author is aiming for something similar but messed up the execution which resulted to this.....anyways I am usually not so critical about fanfics as I treat them as Junkfood but being one of the few LoTM fanfics and it's even a rare cross over with a franchise I also really like (Harry Potter) I can't help but have some expectations then they were dashed by the MC which is why I am now ranting so much due to my frustration. Anyways that is all.