Item: Heir of Chaos.
Rating: 1.8
Author: Allhavens

AllhavensLv114yr

2020-06-10 07:33

This is not a story, it seems more like a dream of a 10-year-old kid who was bullied and now does everything on a whim. If this isn't rubbish, I don't know what is. You can create 1000 chapters per hour, it will still be bad. Let's talk about some problems. MC offers things to a psychopath as if he loves her, just because of a marriage contract. I expected him to use the opposition contract with Voldemort to cancel the wedding, not that. Goblins seek profit. To offer them ancient and unique potions without even knowing what they are form, is absolutely stupid. It could very well be a cure for lycanthropy that would be worth a lot of money and he would never know, because he doesn't care. The goblins took care of their money and goods, even though they were greedy. His excuse was that the MC was the friend of the nation, so he can drop his pants and give the goblins an aphrodisiac and they would never **** their ass. The story has no final purpose. Take over the world, discover all magic, collect all the magical animals or travel the world? He can basically buy everything from the system anyway, so why aspire to find something to do if with a little money the system would give him? A story without purpose is the same as what you heard about a man's fart a centuries ago, completely meaningless.

Heir of Chaos.

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