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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv44yr
2020-10-28 22:59

A well written novel. Creepy in general, but still I liked it. I normally don't find writing scary. Most horror movies are also boring most of the time. But this was not boring as things like The Nun, and others, and it was interesting to read. You could try and make it scarier by giving more description just before the climax of the scene, similar to how the background noises increase in tempo just before the ghost is revealed.

DEATHLY APP

Darlene_Virginia
4.7
109 Chs

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Darlene_Virginia
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Thanks for the review!

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