Item: DEATHLY APP
Rating: 4.6
Author: BaeVida

BaeVidaLv154yr

2020-05-13 17:08

Well catchy Umm title (gulp). Nice writing style, hmm good description, dialogue are nice as well. Well the story almost gave me chills cos I am one person who thinks a lot, I had already started thinking of his unfortunate life with the app and me in his shoes and the 5 random humans every month... Damn he is gonna be turned into a murderer. Hmm, for a first time writing a horror novel, you sure are doing a great work. Recommended for all horror and thriller fans. Come support this book, vote, review and leave a comment for our author here. She is doing a good job. Keep it up Darlene.

DEATHLY APP

Darlene_Virginia

4.7

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Darlene_VirginiaAuthor

Thank you for the review!!

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