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Zinni
ZinniLv54yr
2020-05-14 21:31

fresh and new idea i really like the plot of the story so far , good description, dialogue are nice as well. i love the characters and the app is creepy it gives you the right feeling for horror . great job so far keep it up . **: you over use the name hastin a lot .

DEATHLY APP

Darlene_Virginia
4.7
109 Chs

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Darlene_Virginia
Darlene_VirginiaAuthor

Thank you for the review... I will work on that Hastin part sooner...Thanks for the suggestion!!

4yr
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FINALLY A GOOD ONE OTHER THAN THE NOVEL MY HOUSE OF HORRORS,I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE YO WRITE THIS NOVEL AND NOT DROP IT IN THE MIDDLE JUST LIKE MOST OTHERS DO NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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LordSamurai
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I was attracted to the story and I want to continue reading. However, I found the term to mention it used as "he" in almost every paragraph very repetitive. I advise you to decrease when using your own name. Hastin thought ... Hastin was curious ... You can refer to it using "him", but not very often, because it gets tiring. The novel has a good premise, I will accompany and support you!

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Sigmao
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Although I am not personally a fan of horror novels, this novel is really good. It takes a unique approach to its system and makes it fun and unpredictable.

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BaeVida
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Well catchy Umm title (gulp). Nice writing style, hmm good description, dialogue are nice as well. Well the story almost gave me chills cos I am one person who thinks a lot, I had already started thinking of his unfortunate life with the app and me in his shoes and the 5 random humans every month... Damn he is gonna be turned into a murderer. Hmm, for a first time writing a horror novel, you sure are doing a great work. Recommended for all horror and thriller fans. Come support this book, vote, review and leave a comment for our author here. She is doing a good job. Keep it up Darlene.

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NotUse
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Your book is great! It actually gave me spooky Siri vibes. The descriptions are creative and well thought. The dialogues are good too, and it really makes me interested on what's going to happen next. Nice work!!!

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ryfulrifle
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I am reviewing this story with only 3 chapters so far, this will be more like a general first impression. I would say I am quite hooked and am looking forward to newer chapters! Enjoy the plot so far, though the story develops too fast for my liking. Narration can be smoother, but that's just me being nitpicky. Punctuation can be better, but it's more than readable. Otherwise, I don't know about the characters and world background as there are only 3 chapters, so I'm leaving it at 4 stars for now. TL;DR: Some quality of life changes, but the story has got me hooked with its 3 chapters. Happy reading!

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TheVersalStudios
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I don't know if it's just me but I don't understand anything about this novel. I feel that both the title and the synopsis completely misled me. Since after reading 25 chapters, the stories that are supposed to trap people to death have so little prominence And almost everything comes down to how the MC suffers. To be honest, I found this story a big scam and hardly coherent. I do not recommend it.f it were not for the good writing I would not have even read it.

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