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TheVersalStudios
TheVersalStudiosLv13yr
2021-05-09 13:57

I don't know if it's just me but I don't understand anything about this novel. I feel that both the title and the synopsis completely misled me. Since after reading 25 chapters, the stories that are supposed to trap people to death have so little prominence And almost everything comes down to how the MC suffers. To be honest, I found this story a big scam and hardly coherent. I do not recommend it.f it were not for the good writing I would not have even read it.

DEATHLY APP

Darlene_Virginia
4.7
109 Chs

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PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

FINALLY A GOOD ONE OTHER THAN THE NOVEL MY HOUSE OF HORRORS,I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL CONTINUE YO WRITE THIS NOVEL AND NOT DROP IT IN THE MIDDLE JUST LIKE MOST OTHERS DO NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

4yr

RainlessShine
RainlessShineLv1

WOW! Goosebumps! It's my first time reading this kind of genre but it really caught my interest. Everything was perfectly described. You’re great Author.

4yr
O_Wolfs
O_WolfsLv2

Reveal spoiler

4yr
LordSamurai
LordSamuraiLv4

I was attracted to the story and I want to continue reading. However, I found the term to mention it used as "he" in almost every paragraph very repetitive. I advise you to decrease when using your own name. Hastin thought ... Hastin was curious ... You can refer to it using "him", but not very often, because it gets tiring. The novel has a good premise, I will accompany and support you!

4yr
Sigmao
SigmaoLv11

Although I am not personally a fan of horror novels, this novel is really good. It takes a unique approach to its system and makes it fun and unpredictable.

4yr
Zinni
ZinniLv5

fresh and new idea i really like the plot of the story so far , good description, dialogue are nice as well. i love the characters and the app is creepy it gives you the right feeling for horror . great job so far keep it up . **: you over use the name hastin a lot .

4yr
BaeVida
BaeVidaLv15

Well catchy Umm title (gulp). Nice writing style, hmm good description, dialogue are nice as well. Well the story almost gave me chills cos I am one person who thinks a lot, I had already started thinking of his unfortunate life with the app and me in his shoes and the 5 random humans every month... Damn he is gonna be turned into a murderer. Hmm, for a first time writing a horror novel, you sure are doing a great work. Recommended for all horror and thriller fans. Come support this book, vote, review and leave a comment for our author here. She is doing a good job. Keep it up Darlene.

4yr
NotUse
NotUseLv4

Your book is great! It actually gave me spooky Siri vibes. The descriptions are creative and well thought. The dialogues are good too, and it really makes me interested on what's going to happen next. Nice work!!!

4yr
ryfulrifle
ryfulrifleLv4

I am reviewing this story with only 3 chapters so far, this will be more like a general first impression. I would say I am quite hooked and am looking forward to newer chapters! Enjoy the plot so far, though the story develops too fast for my liking. Narration can be smoother, but that's just me being nitpicky. Punctuation can be better, but it's more than readable. Otherwise, I don't know about the characters and world background as there are only 3 chapters, so I'm leaving it at 4 stars for now. TL;DR: Some quality of life changes, but the story has got me hooked with its 3 chapters. Happy reading!

4yr
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