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Raizel2524677
Raizel2524677Lv144yr
2020-06-06 00:07

This novel is amazingly detailed and while there some cons to it, the novel is detailed and the MC is reasonably characterized. I feel that this novel should be selected as it is a refreshing twist on a original topic and I would to see where it would go. Not that I really like this novel.

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Demon_uprising
Demon_uprisingLv3

Agree I hope it will be the next to be chosen next week

Snowflake2
Snowflake2Lv11

Me too.

TheOneWithBooks
TheOneWithBooksLv15

I disagree, by the end of chapter 60 the Mc is op, there is no point in reading a book where he becomes op.

emarie85
emarie85Lv5

Ummm. I might try to read this book too.

I_Teach_nothing
I_Teach_nothingLv10

Yes

hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

Cap

Yeshwanth90
Yeshwanth90Lv6

Agree

paradocs
paradocsLv4

I'm enjoying it, agree with everything else though

Ayoub_Maari
Ayoub_MaariLv3

Dhdnckx

TheEruditeReader
TheEruditeReaderLv13

Is being op bad? I believe, how you are while being op matter more.. ? Like arrogant and all the story' declining bad behavior or too smart and too complicated that it give the reader a headache. The strong to weak mc has been the focus of most novel, including but not limited to the cultivation type novel, hero novels, isekai novels and many other. Novels of 2020 are about op people with op capability being more than themselves, suppressing the "power quest hungry mc" to the more "community power mc". Suppression of it allows the reader to elude the power concepts to an instance end with privilege or ability upgrade to bring the story focus back to the process with curiosity to the reward the mc may get from this process.

TheOneWithBooks:I disagree, by the end of chapter 60 the Mc is op, there is no point in reading a book where he becomes op.
Brooke_is_weird
Brooke_is_weirdLv12

Cry ccgcghuu GI no pl o onok

Demon_uprising:Agree I hope it will be the next to be chosen next week
BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

Its crap with hell of alot of inconsistencies

Daoist301810
Daoist301810Lv2

Yes

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

No

Demon_uprising:Agree I hope it will be the next to be chosen next week
Art_Romanillos
Art_RomanillosLv2

I agree, I hope doesn't get twisted by "beauties " like other retarded novel MC.

LordofDemise
LordofDemiseLv13

Why not? The novel is pretty good tbh

Supreme_Devil:No
Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4

Nothing good or new in it ,it's average, I prefer the other one any day of the week.

LordofDemise:Why not? The novel is pretty good tbh
LordofDemise
LordofDemiseLv13

Well its your opinion ig, personally I want to read more of this.

Supreme_Devil:Nothing good or new in it ,it's average, I prefer the other one any day of the week.
Nat_Powell
Nat_PowellLv11

PTC2PURF add me

Nat_Powell
Nat_PowellLv11

PTC2PURF add me

Demon_uprising:Agree I hope it will be the next to be chosen next week
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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

I am back. As I promised, a review after reading 200+ chapters. Currently I have read till chapter 400, so I believe I might be able to shed some more light on this story and what you can expect. To began with, I am reading this through raws, so I can't comment on translator quality or stability of update. But, from the already released 60 chapters, the translation quality is readable but not exactly upto the bar. One thing I like about the story is it's simplicity. Until now, author has stayed true to the main theme of the story : collecting debt and bringing back the bank to its former glory. Most CN stories seem to forget why they started the story. Everything just seems to spiral out of control. Every arc will have its own mission. There is no end goal. But here you can see what the story is about. MC doesn't deviates from ut. It does has smaller arcs but they are there to support and fill in the main theme. Another thing which makes me like this story more is short filler arcs. Oh, there are fillers arcs, short side story arcs, supporting chapters and what not. But author clearly recognises on where to stop. You won't find stupid tournament arcs or trasure hunting arcs stretching over several tens of chapters. Coming to the MC. He's OP. Which actually suits the theme of the story. He doesn't acts like your genric OP MC. You won't find him bullying people or slaughtering families. In fact, he rarely leaves the bank. It's mostly his ever increasing group of subordinates who collect debt. Only when they kick a hard stubble will the MC come to deal with it. Now about his personality. Please don't expect proper character building and depth. He's no character from ASOIF or something from the hands of Sanderson, Abercrombie or Butcher. He's quite simple and honestly, one dimensional. One thing in his favour is his modern sensibilities. Atleast until now I haven't seem him having any inclination for harem. Infact he dislikes harem. So harem haters will definitely like this. He's not dense and something is building between him and Seven. It's not romance but there are flirting moments here and there. I won't spoil it further but its pretty good for a non romantic CN novel. And yes he's not stupid. You can see why he's making a deal. He knows when he can rip someone off and when he has to stay neutral. Pretty good imo. One thing which ticks me off, is side charcter development. They are fanatical in belief to the level of zealots. The angels have NO character growth or development. They are like NPCs to help the MC. Only needed when a side quest requires it. Pretty sad. They could have fleshed out the story further. But I can see that author wants to play safe. Dealing with multiple characters is not a simple task. You need to balance the fine line between too less and too much. World development is a bit icky. You have ten mortal world's, nine immortal worlds and one big celestial/divine world. The raw terms are a bit confusing so please forgive me if these do not match the translation. The world is not exactly fleshed out. You know it's there but that's it. It's both good and bad. You don't have long arcs wasted on/in other worlds but at the same time , you don't have much impression of those worlds. I haveany more things to say, but I will story here. I will just summarise the whole review. Pro : 1: Single goal. No nonsense targets or anything. 2: Very less filler. 3: No Harem. 4: MC with modern sensibilities. 5: MC is not stupid Cons : 1: one dimensional character. 2: Zealot subordinates and no development. 3: No world development. Note : 1: OP MC That's it for now. Cya.

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