Yeshwanth90

Like the sample of new pokemon fanfic , keep going [img=recommend]

It should be uchiha something not yuan ye, feels like a wuxia novel

It’s not yunyin

I believe from ch 15 the story is botched , no offense but it should have been mentioned in the tags

Feels like a wuxia not a fanfic

The translation is bad , this fanfic needs a rewrite

Good start, I have read one of you previous works of pokemon fanfic it’s really good , I really enjoyed reading your work

The novel turned dark real quick, good fanfic enjoyed reading it

The Fanfic is really good and just a suggestion , please end the flash backs in 2 chapters at most dragging it won’t help the story at all

Just some feedback for author: The backstory is taking too long and any reader would loose interest if backstories aren’t brief , I really like the fanfic but in the near future can you please try keep it simple.