Yeshwanth90

The fanfic is good and if you put the same level of focus on this fanfic as the other this would be really good one

Like the sample of new pokemon fanfic , keep going

It should be uchiha something not yuan ye, feels like a wuxia novel

It’s not yunyin

I believe from ch 15 the story is botched , no offense but it should have been mentioned in the tags

Feels like a wuxia not a fanfic

The translation is bad , this fanfic needs a rewrite

Good start, I have read one of you previous works of pokemon fanfic it’s really good , I really enjoyed reading your work

The novel turned dark real quick, good fanfic enjoyed reading it

The Fanfic is really good and just a suggestion , please end the flash backs in 2 chapters at most dragging it won’t help the story at all