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littlemist
littlemistLv54yr
2020-06-06 00:07

This review is based on the free chapters. It has a similar concept to Trafford's Trading Club (buy anything as long as you can pay for it), and although I like such settings, I'm personally not a super big fan of this novel. It's okay, but I find the biggest problem is that I'm not a fan of how much killing is going on and how arrogant the MC is as soon as he obtains the power of the Bank. I'm never a big fan of characters that solve all their problems through brute force and killing. Idk, it just makes it feel a little lackluster, especially if the entire novel is just going to be like this, collecting debts by killing people until the succumb. This type of novel is also the type that seems like it can easily become repetitive. Trafford's Trading Club was much better, it actually had some very moving stories, meanwhile this is just so... mediocre in comparison (that being said, they are quite different despite having the similar setting of buying whatever you desire).

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AverageEnjoyer
AverageEnjoyerLv5

Did we read the same thing? mc wasn't really that arrogant and if you compare him to the almost emotionless mc of the Trafford's trading club then yes he would definitely look arrogant especially since the setting is in xianxia world. I've read all the chapters up to 60 and he really didn't kill all the debtors especially if they don't deserve it. Unlike the Trafford's Trading Club The Mc here took over the bank already filled with debts and the debtors didn't return it. Do You expect for the mc to politely ask for their debts obviously no since it's the debtor's fault and would definitely not return it.

littlemist
littlemistLv5

if they kill the debtors, then where will the get the resources back from? it's just a permanent loss. in fact, in real life, most debt collectors, even "bad" ones, usually won't kill the debtor because as long as the debtor is still alive there is still a chance of getting back some amount of money, but if they die then it's a permanent loss of money. for example when archangel gabriel killed that one dude that could not pay back the resources - he should have turned him into a slave or something to produce the resources to make up for the debt instead. killing them just doesn't make sense to me. torture them to teach them a lesson before letting them gather resources to pay back, sure, but the killing is not only needless, but also disadvantageous.

AverageEnjoyer:Did we read the same thing? mc wasn't really that arrogant and if you compare him to the almost emotionless mc of the Trafford's trading club then yes he would definitely look arrogant especially since the setting is in xianxia world. I've read all the chapters up to 60 and he really didn't kill all the debtors especially if they don't deserve it. Unlike the Trafford's Trading Club The Mc here took over the bank already filled with debts and the debtors didn't return it. Do You expect for the mc to politely ask for their debts obviously no since it's the debtor's fault and would definitely not return it.
Whtvr
WhtvrLv5

This novel is **** yes, Trafford trading club was way better

Chakkapan
ChakkapanLv14

Good review 👌

93ImagineBreaker
93ImagineBreakerLv2

Might a well do TTC again Qidian got weird logic.

Whtvr:This novel is **** yes, Trafford trading club was way better
sanguine
sanguineLv6

Aren't the author of a quick transmigration novel with a main character named Qing Mei (if I recall correctly, I read the novel a long time ago, so I apologize in advance if I got it wrong). Just wanted to say that I really liked your work and we somehow had similar tastes in music. Also the sex scene sucked uwu (no offense, just honest opinion).

sanguine
sanguineLv6

Aren't the author of a quick transmigration novel with a main character named Qing Mei (if I recall correctly, I read the novel a long time ago, so I apologize in advance if I got it wrong). Just wanted to say that I really liked your work and we somehow had similar tastes in music. Also the sex scene sucked uwu (no offense, just honest opinion).

sanguine
sanguineLv6

Aren't the author of a quick transmigration novel with a main character named Qing Mei (if I recall correctly, I read the novel a long time ago, so I apologize in advance if I got it wrong). Just wanted to say that I really liked your work and we somehow had similar tastes in music. Also the sex scene sucked uwu (no offense, just honest opinion).

littlemist
littlemistLv5

Yin Mei lol. got busy with life and no more inspiration so i dropped it a while back lol. Yeah I think I even apologized for the skipped/bad sexy scene. not good at that kinda thing. was very cringey and awkward for me to write lol.

sanguine:Aren't the author of a quick transmigration novel with a main character named Qing Mei (if I recall correctly, I read the novel a long time ago, so I apologize in advance if I got it wrong). Just wanted to say that I really liked your work and we somehow had similar tastes in music. Also the sex scene sucked uwu (no offense, just honest opinion).
sanguine
sanguineLv6

Your writing style was quite nice, it's just that it was probably hard to write about world after world with each one having different rules and concepts and brand new characters. If you were a chinese BL novelist you probably wouldn't have to worry about explicit scenes since it'd be forbidden anyway.

littlemist:Yin Mei lol. got busy with life and no more inspiration so i dropped it a while back lol. Yeah I think I even apologized for the skipped/bad sexy scene. not good at that kinda thing. was very cringey and awkward for me to write lol.
sanguine
sanguineLv6

Your writing style was quite nice, it's just that it was probably hard to write about world after world with each one having different rules and concepts and brand new characters. If you were a chinese BL novelist you probably wouldn't have to worry about explicit scenes since it'd be forbidden anyway.

littlemist:Yin Mei lol. got busy with life and no more inspiration so i dropped it a while back lol. Yeah I think I even apologized for the skipped/bad sexy scene. not good at that kinda thing. was very cringey and awkward for me to write lol.
hung_up_my_coat
hung_up_my_coatLv3

Tbh he didnt even really need to go after the debitors at first either. He could have first built up his wealth, which should be easy to do if u can teleport all over thr universe, and then suffocate the debtors for them to pay off their debts. His banks is worthless and he has no leverage.

AverageEnjoyer:Did we read the same thing? mc wasn't really that arrogant and if you compare him to the almost emotionless mc of the Trafford's trading club then yes he would definitely look arrogant especially since the setting is in xianxia world. I've read all the chapters up to 60 and he really didn't kill all the debtors especially if they don't deserve it. Unlike the Trafford's Trading Club The Mc here took over the bank already filled with debts and the debtors didn't return it. Do You expect for the mc to politely ask for their debts obviously no since it's the debtor's fault and would definitely not return it.
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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

I am back. As I promised, a review after reading 200+ chapters. Currently I have read till chapter 400, so I believe I might be able to shed some more light on this story and what you can expect. To began with, I am reading this through raws, so I can't comment on translator quality or stability of update. But, from the already released 60 chapters, the translation quality is readable but not exactly upto the bar. One thing I like about the story is it's simplicity. Until now, author has stayed true to the main theme of the story : collecting debt and bringing back the bank to its former glory. Most CN stories seem to forget why they started the story. Everything just seems to spiral out of control. Every arc will have its own mission. There is no end goal. But here you can see what the story is about. MC doesn't deviates from ut. It does has smaller arcs but they are there to support and fill in the main theme. Another thing which makes me like this story more is short filler arcs. Oh, there are fillers arcs, short side story arcs, supporting chapters and what not. But author clearly recognises on where to stop. You won't find stupid tournament arcs or trasure hunting arcs stretching over several tens of chapters. Coming to the MC. He's OP. Which actually suits the theme of the story. He doesn't acts like your genric OP MC. You won't find him bullying people or slaughtering families. In fact, he rarely leaves the bank. It's mostly his ever increasing group of subordinates who collect debt. Only when they kick a hard stubble will the MC come to deal with it. Now about his personality. Please don't expect proper character building and depth. He's no character from ASOIF or something from the hands of Sanderson, Abercrombie or Butcher. He's quite simple and honestly, one dimensional. One thing in his favour is his modern sensibilities. Atleast until now I haven't seem him having any inclination for harem. Infact he dislikes harem. So harem haters will definitely like this. He's not dense and something is building between him and Seven. It's not romance but there are flirting moments here and there. I won't spoil it further but its pretty good for a non romantic CN novel. And yes he's not stupid. You can see why he's making a deal. He knows when he can rip someone off and when he has to stay neutral. Pretty good imo. One thing which ticks me off, is side charcter development. They are fanatical in belief to the level of zealots. The angels have NO character growth or development. They are like NPCs to help the MC. Only needed when a side quest requires it. Pretty sad. They could have fleshed out the story further. But I can see that author wants to play safe. Dealing with multiple characters is not a simple task. You need to balance the fine line between too less and too much. World development is a bit icky. You have ten mortal world's, nine immortal worlds and one big celestial/divine world. The raw terms are a bit confusing so please forgive me if these do not match the translation. The world is not exactly fleshed out. You know it's there but that's it. It's both good and bad. You don't have long arcs wasted on/in other worlds but at the same time , you don't have much impression of those worlds. I haveany more things to say, but I will story here. I will just summarise the whole review. Pro : 1: Single goal. No nonsense targets or anything. 2: Very less filler. 3: No Harem. 4: MC with modern sensibilities. 5: MC is not stupid Cons : 1: one dimensional character. 2: Zealot subordinates and no development. 3: No world development. Note : 1: OP MC That's it for now. Cya.

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