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Muspon
MusponLv134yr
2020-06-05 19:38

Ok i'm going to have to drop it right here this is a quality novel with a great idea but unfortunately the translation quality is very bad the formation the wording all around bad don't get me wrong you can read this but its quite hard

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Muspon
MusponLv13

also one more thing it is too much fast pace we just jump into it and keep on going at god speed

ramp_seeker
ramp_seekerLv5

bro this novel is god but translator did **** on it and the word of fast pase that's acceptable because i have more speedy than this

zeref666
zeref666Lv14

I haven’t read it yet is it really that bad? Because I don’t want to waste my time

Muspon:also one more thing it is too much fast pace we just jump into it and keep on going at god speed
Heretoc
HeretocLv4

Its readable. Infact many might not even notice the mistakes and just skip over it. It's not at the level of MTL. It's average. And in terms of Qidian Quality, definitely above average. The story is good. But that's just me and I have only read till chapter 40. But untill now it's definitely a good read.

zeref666:I haven’t read it yet is it really that bad? Because I don’t want to waste my time
zeref666
zeref666Lv14

Good enough for me if it above average

Heretoc:Its readable. Infact many might not even notice the mistakes and just skip over it. It's not at the level of MTL. It's average. And in terms of Qidian Quality, definitely above average. The story is good. But that's just me and I have only read till chapter 40. But untill now it's definitely a good read.
Muspon
MusponLv13

yeah its okay but the formatting is kind of bad

zeref666:Good enough for me if it above average
ramp_seeker
ramp_seekerLv5

That's editor to blame

Tofu
TofuLv4

Actually the formatting is the author, not the translator nor the editors fault

Daoist_Zheng
Daoist_ZhengLv10

Explosion!

Hidden_Review
Hidden_ReviewLv15

MTL? Are you talking about that website? Or a story?

Heretoc:Its readable. Infact many might not even notice the mistakes and just skip over it. It's not at the level of MTL. It's average. And in terms of Qidian Quality, definitely above average. The story is good. But that's just me and I have only read till chapter 40. But untill now it's definitely a good read.
Heretoc
HeretocLv4

MTL basically Google Translation or any machine translation. Some people clean it up a bit and fix few mistakes here and there. That's usually MTL.

Hidden_Review:MTL? Are you talking about that website? Or a story?
Indiskyz
IndiskyzLv6

pls say sike, just when i was getting so excited that a novel that actually sounds interesting to me has been picked

Hidden_Review
Hidden_ReviewLv15

You should definitely read it, there are some mistakes here and there. But it’s definitely an enjoyable read. I can’t wait until it gets accepted and I could read more.

Indiskyz:pls say sike, just when i was getting so excited that a novel that actually sounds interesting to me has been picked
No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15

Yes I will read it. Hopefully the quality improves 👍👍

Hidden_Review:You should definitely read it, there are some mistakes here and there. But it’s definitely an enjoyable read. I can’t wait until it gets accepted and I could read more.
Karry_Wang_2109
Karry_Wang_2109Lv3

Uk

Muspon
MusponLv13

???

Karry_Wang_2109:Uk
Eric_Livering
Eric_LiveringLv3

Like it

Muspon
MusponLv13

????

Eric_Livering:Like it
Shallteer
ShallteerLv4

This comment is helpful, I almost read it.

TheSupremeReader
TheSupremeReaderLv6

It's okay I even read MTL that hurt my head so much, if it really is as bad as you say I'll just skim through it.

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Heretoc
HeretocLv4

I am back. As I promised, a review after reading 200+ chapters. Currently I have read till chapter 400, so I believe I might be able to shed some more light on this story and what you can expect. To began with, I am reading this through raws, so I can't comment on translator quality or stability of update. But, from the already released 60 chapters, the translation quality is readable but not exactly upto the bar. One thing I like about the story is it's simplicity. Until now, author has stayed true to the main theme of the story : collecting debt and bringing back the bank to its former glory. Most CN stories seem to forget why they started the story. Everything just seems to spiral out of control. Every arc will have its own mission. There is no end goal. But here you can see what the story is about. MC doesn't deviates from ut. It does has smaller arcs but they are there to support and fill in the main theme. Another thing which makes me like this story more is short filler arcs. Oh, there are fillers arcs, short side story arcs, supporting chapters and what not. But author clearly recognises on where to stop. You won't find stupid tournament arcs or trasure hunting arcs stretching over several tens of chapters. Coming to the MC. He's OP. Which actually suits the theme of the story. He doesn't acts like your genric OP MC. You won't find him bullying people or slaughtering families. In fact, he rarely leaves the bank. It's mostly his ever increasing group of subordinates who collect debt. Only when they kick a hard stubble will the MC come to deal with it. Now about his personality. Please don't expect proper character building and depth. He's no character from ASOIF or something from the hands of Sanderson, Abercrombie or Butcher. He's quite simple and honestly, one dimensional. One thing in his favour is his modern sensibilities. Atleast until now I haven't seem him having any inclination for harem. Infact he dislikes harem. So harem haters will definitely like this. He's not dense and something is building between him and Seven. It's not romance but there are flirting moments here and there. I won't spoil it further but its pretty good for a non romantic CN novel. And yes he's not stupid. You can see why he's making a deal. He knows when he can rip someone off and when he has to stay neutral. Pretty good imo. One thing which ticks me off, is side charcter development. They are fanatical in belief to the level of zealots. The angels have NO character growth or development. They are like NPCs to help the MC. Only needed when a side quest requires it. Pretty sad. They could have fleshed out the story further. But I can see that author wants to play safe. Dealing with multiple characters is not a simple task. You need to balance the fine line between too less and too much. World development is a bit icky. You have ten mortal world's, nine immortal worlds and one big celestial/divine world. The raw terms are a bit confusing so please forgive me if these do not match the translation. The world is not exactly fleshed out. You know it's there but that's it. It's both good and bad. You don't have long arcs wasted on/in other worlds but at the same time , you don't have much impression of those worlds. I haveany more things to say, but I will story here. I will just summarise the whole review. Pro : 1: Single goal. No nonsense targets or anything. 2: Very less filler. 3: No Harem. 4: MC with modern sensibilities. 5: MC is not stupid Cons : 1: one dimensional character. 2: Zealot subordinates and no development. 3: No world development. Note : 1: OP MC That's it for now. Cya.

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