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YourMaster
YourMasterLv33yr
2021-06-11 12:42

I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.

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Releaxy
ReleaxyLv1

Literally

Sesoni
SesoniLv15

Yeah it blows my mind that stuff like this is topping the charts, but gems like Psychic Parasite get nothing because it requires more than a 3rd grade reading level to follow.

Zeeshan_Haider_8466
Zeeshan_Haider_8466Lv1

I find it insulting that u compare the author to a 12 year old. Why u may ask? Bcz I'm 13 yrs old and trust me, I would do a way better job. The author is more like a 10 yr old.

Abdilatif_Said
Abdilatif_SaidLv2

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Zeeshan_Haider_8466:I find it insulting that u compare the author to a 12 year old. Why u may ask? Bcz I'm 13 yrs old and trust me, I would do a way better job. The author is more like a 10 yr old.
Boundless_Daoist
Boundless_DaoistLv3

How far did you read?

kennykangaroo2
kennykangaroo2Lv4

Agreed, and with Supreme Magus, that author is just beating a horse for money that died somewhere between chapter 1700-2200 (for me at least.) The novels in the top 3 are NEVER going to end, even while they're releasing 22 chapters a week, when a year or two ago the fastest releases were 14 chapters a week. There's no way at all that these authors are putting much thought into the plot of their novels and are only focusing on filling and padding two tiny chapters for the day. I'd rather 3–5 chapters a week than 22 chapters a week of slop chapters that take you less than a minute to read.

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Adui
AduiAuthor

So it has been five months since I began writing this novel, and here is an updated review answering some of the many questions I come across. Of course, first and foremost is the story itself: Noah Osmont is an average guy in his 20s with no superhuman brain or genius-level IQ, and he receives the gift of Infinite Mana in a world facing an apocalypse, a world that is filled with Dungeons that routinely need to be cleared or they will explode with monsters. He learns more about his gift as he starts off his adventure as a Hunter, much of his time filled with blood-pumping battles as he spams spectacular Skills on unsuspecting Dungeon Bosses. This adventure continues as he becomes stronger, learns to become smarter, and uncovers the mystery behind his Infinite Mana, as well as get tangled with the major powers of his world. This fast-paced adventure quickly moves forward as even more mysteries are unraveled- Who initiated the apocalypse on their world? How many more worlds are out there facing the same thing? Why exactly are Emperor Penguins so arrogant? Which world's cuisine is actually the best? The adventure will be long and exciting, with an ending nowhere in sight as we uncover more mysteries about the worlds around us, and the Ancient Powers that move behind the scenes... Q- Will there be a harem? A-Well, yes, a mini harem at most, with only two or at maximum three Female Leads. Q- Will the MC actually get smarter? Yes- He's a normal guy learning about everything firsthand and trying to improve, not a Webnovel reader equipped with immense knowledge of what can and should happen in the future of a story, and the exact correct ways to react to it. He will eventually become more pragmatic and careful as ruthlessness slowly see** in, without him becoming a cold-blooded murderer. Q- Just how OP will the MC become? A- Very. There is no limit to OPness Q- Anything else I should know before I start binging? A- It's a fast-paced novel with no heaven rending beauties described for an entire chapter, filled with action and powerful Skills and Abilities that only expand as time goes. Enjoy the ride, and a big thank you goes towards the readers who have supported and enjoyed the novel all this time ^.^

TrueGodOfExp
TrueGodOfExpLv6
MadAuthor
MadAuthorLv1

i describe the book in one sentence, something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,

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