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NakedFuryLv24yr
2020-07-18 22:45

Started as a sort of nice twist to the usual dungeon stories but the mediocre grammar, zero character development, one dimensional lame mediocre side character and cartoon villains make this a forgettable novel. Suffers the usual mediocre lame grammar pretty much every single story in this website has. Would not recommend.

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Eternal_CrusaderLv15

it gets better the longer you read it, as the author gains more experience and the plot grows. there is character development later in the book.

dukkehLv4

does mc start using his str and vit stats that he gets from infinite amount of buff skills or not? because so far I'm very dissapointed with mc ignoring the potential of being magic caster that can also fight head on against melee focused knights etc at his "level" .

Eternal_Crusader:it gets better the longer you read it, as the author gains more experience and the plot grows. there is character development later in the book.
Eternal_CrusaderLv15

Yes he does, and so much more!

dukkeh:does mc start using his str and vit stats that he gets from infinite amount of buff skills or not? because so far I'm very dissapointed with mc ignoring the potential of being magic caster that can also fight head on against melee focused knights etc at his "level" .
NatHugLv3

He uses his head a lot more the more you read!

dukkeh:does mc start using his str and vit stats that he gets from infinite amount of buff skills or not? because so far I'm very dissapointed with mc ignoring the potential of being magic caster that can also fight head on against melee focused knights etc at his "level" .
Milk_C0ffee_ColorLv1

destroying a universe by literally flicking it goes far beyond "str and vit" stats

dukkeh:does mc start using his str and vit stats that he gets from infinite amount of buff skills or not? because so far I'm very dissapointed with mc ignoring the potential of being magic caster that can also fight head on against melee focused knights etc at his "level" .
DruggedCookieLv2

I just want to know if there is yuri in the harem, it's because if there is, I don't read it, but no one answers :( xd

dukkeh:does mc start using his str and vit stats that he gets from infinite amount of buff skills or not? because so far I'm very dissapointed with mc ignoring the potential of being magic caster that can also fight head on against melee focused knights etc at his "level" .
Daoist845071Lv11

there is a harem

DruggedCookie:I just want to know if there is yuri in the harem, it's because if there is, I don't read it, but no one answers :( xd
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AduiAuthor

So it has been five months since I began writing this novel, and here is an updated review answering some of the many questions I come across. Of course, first and foremost is the story itself: Noah Osmont is an average guy in his 20s with no superhuman brain or genius-level IQ, and he receives the gift of Infinite Mana in a world facing an apocalypse, a world that is filled with Dungeons that routinely need to be cleared or they will explode with monsters. He learns more about his gift as he starts off his adventure as a Hunter, much of his time filled with blood-pumping battles as he spams spectacular Skills on unsuspecting Dungeon Bosses. This adventure continues as he becomes stronger, learns to become smarter, and uncovers the mystery behind his Infinite Mana, as well as get tangled with the major powers of his world. This fast-paced adventure quickly moves forward as even more mysteries are unraveled- Who initiated the apocalypse on their world? How many more worlds are out there facing the same thing? Why exactly are Emperor Penguins so arrogant? Which world's cuisine is actually the best? The adventure will be long and exciting, with an ending nowhere in sight as we uncover more mysteries about the worlds around us, and the Ancient Powers that move behind the scenes... Q- Will there be a harem? A-Well, yes, a mini harem at most, with only two or at maximum three Female Leads. Q- Will the MC actually get smarter? Yes- He's a normal guy learning about everything firsthand and trying to improve, not a Webnovel reader equipped with immense knowledge of what can and should happen in the future of a story, and the exact correct ways to react to it. He will eventually become more pragmatic and careful as ruthlessness slowly see** in, without him becoming a cold-blooded murderer. Q- Just how OP will the MC become? A- Very. There is no limit to OPness Q- Anything else I should know before I start binging? A- It's a fast-paced novel with no heaven rending beauties described for an entire chapter, filled with action and powerful Skills and Abilities that only expand as time goes. Enjoy the ride, and a big thank you goes towards the readers who have supported and enjoyed the novel all this time ^.^

TrueGodOfExpLv6
MadAuthorLv1

i describe the book in one sentence, something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,

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