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MadAuthor
MadAuthorLv13yr
2021-02-21 22:13

i describe the book in one sentence, something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,

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Serrra
SerrraLv1

Hello there, since last year my friend is writing a book. His book is about bloodlines, kingdoms, and superpowers. The problem is he is not getting any support. I told him to share on a couple of sites but it didn't get any attention. If you guys can check that out and leave a comment it would be really good for him. Have a good day. The book's name is: Wolf Bloodline

TheDarkCheese
TheDarkCheeseLv10

actually your missed something that the side characters do, theres a bunch of side harem members

Cerberusss
CerberusssLv2

how far did you read?

MadAuthor
MadAuthorLv1

up to the part where leader of celestials die

Cerberusss:how far did you read?
Sin_Of_Gluttony
Sin_Of_GluttonyLv13

Until the end of Atlantis arc it wasn't terribly bad Mc becomes just straight up unkillable, you completely stop feeling that little bit of thrill the story gave you before (which wasn't much to be onest), you just KNOW that no matter what foe he faces, he will defeat him with very little effort just by spamming skills, or simply hiding until he accumulates enough power to simply overwhelm his enemies In simple words, it just becomes incredibly boring after a while

MadAuthor:up to the part where leader of celestials die
ultimatecoom
ultimatecoomLv3

it did not change later on

Cerberusss:how far did you read?
Zhsiejsj
ZhsiejsjLv13

I’ m up to 1900 chapters + , It’s always a repeat Going to new place, starts weak gets strong, leaves to another higher place, repeat same cycle and change the names basically Another annoying part is the author keep mentioning how the MC will be known years later as the tyrannical emperor or people in the future will dread this of him or that What’s the point of reading on if you keep saying everything is alright and the MC keeps getting his way. Like omg.…. The MC has never actually lost anything of his once. ….. I must be brain dead now with the chapters I read.

MKmanyr
MKmanyrLv4

the repetitions was the exactl reason I dropped it after 1200 chapters

Zhsiejsj:I’ m up to 1900 chapters + , It’s always a repeat Going to new place, starts weak gets strong, leaves to another higher place, repeat same cycle and change the names basically Another annoying part is the author keep mentioning how the MC will be known years later as the tyrannical emperor or people in the future will dread this of him or that What’s the point of reading on if you keep saying everything is alright and the MC keeps getting his way. Like omg.…. The MC has never actually lost anything of his once. ….. I must be brain dead now with the chapters I read.
Ziyad_Radwan
Ziyad_RadwanLv1

Thanks bro you saved my time

Zhsiejsj:I’ m up to 1900 chapters + , It’s always a repeat Going to new place, starts weak gets strong, leaves to another higher place, repeat same cycle and change the names basically Another annoying part is the author keep mentioning how the MC will be known years later as the tyrannical emperor or people in the future will dread this of him or that What’s the point of reading on if you keep saying everything is alright and the MC keeps getting his way. Like omg.…. The MC has never actually lost anything of his once. ….. I must be brain dead now with the chapters I read.
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