Zeeshan_Haider_8466

Thanks god. All the novels i can find in this genre is all about smut. i thank u with from the depths of my heart. 🙏🫡

The MC seems like a trained professional or something, and that means having alot of exp fighting various opponents. So I dont see why he is impressed with a simple act of determination. It's just used as a plot point. Storied like this are usually extremely fast paced. But never well done. Really ruins the experience

Heavenly dynasty 💀? Don't u just mean china 😂🇵🇰 seriously for some reason Chinese people are so brainwashed by propaganda that it's funny. (I'm just inferring from Chinese novels that I read.)

It accelerated way too fast in the ending. It was very shocking tho. Pretty cool overall. I recommend binging this. _____________________________________________________________________

U' know bcz it isn't compatible with ur story

It's actually shit. No joke. He keeps on forgetting about many of his cursed spirits that he has ( for ex forgets about his healing cursed spirit that he used to fully use limitless during the fight with the fumes cursed spirit and nearly died) and character interactions b/w mc and shoko and satomi are painful to read.Author makes the mc too op and then had to magically make him weaker. Plz author this story has alot of potential no joke. Can't u like commission some professional writer or some thing or atleast just move away from the jjk plot

Although the English is perfect, I can't stand how over dramatic the author is in the few chapters that I have read. Like dude the author was constantly saying cheesy as stuff, about how the mc and his friends resolve strengthened and some other bullshit. Sorry but I can't deal with that. I sure it's a good novel for some but for me it's shitty

This story is over all pretty good except from two major flaws. Idk if the writer is Chinese or he just reads way too many Chinese novels bcz the way of speech is too robotic and repetitive. If the author can add bit of a human touch it would be way better.( For example the way Scizor and cobalt used to argue in the 100s was too repetitive and the insults used were repeated continuously. It's used as comedic relief and that also pretty badly. Other than that the romance is cringy af. There's no such thing as love at first sight and I'm pretty disappointed that this novel went in that direction just for quicker 'lemon scenes'. Other than these there r some minor flaws that I can't bother to write rn but overall if the author takes care of these flaws that novel would be near purrrfect. [Ps: I dropped the novel at about 150th chapter so I don't know about the case of the last few chapters]

My guy, not to be a nerd but Abu Dhabi at 1980's was definitely not luxurious.

You r dragging this arc out for way too long