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AduiAuthor4yr
2020-04-24 12:29

Hi everyone, obligatory author review here. I've been playing around with this concept for quite a while and wanted to create something that I would have fun reading myself. My goal is for a clean and fast paced novel with an abundant amount of cliff hangers. Hope you guys enjoy!

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davidAaLv5

Very enjoyable indeed

Anonymous0007Lv5

Nice

Anonymous0007Lv5

Nice

SloAngelLv6

Very nice

OneHitAsuraLv14

I'm enjoying this a lot so far question tho, will there be a good female lead for him or do you not plan to have any romance? Would love to see a bit of romance

AduiAuthor

A few ***** themes will be implied in the story with very little romance is all I can say ^.^

OneHitAsura:I'm enjoying this a lot so far question tho, will there be a good female lead for him or do you not plan to have any romance? Would love to see a bit of romance
DeVoidedLv15

Harem or OTP?

AduiAuthor

Haha not a harem per se, but he does play around. There will be a future main girl that won't appear for quite a while though

DeVoided:Harem or OTP?
lynnjr05Lv15

Great story! While there is not an abundance of errors, if you need an editor I'd love to work with you! (No charge) for a few chapters until you are satisfied with my work. Thank you again for the Novel!

NebiLv6

One of best novel ever i read Thanks a lot 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Very enjoyable i agree but a **** fk mc a little..... that fks the mood....to be honest....

devilboybkLv14

Or has it already appeared in a protected village?

Adui:Haha not a harem per se, but he does play around. There will be a future main girl that won't appear for quite a while though
Reg_LXIXLv2

Do you have experience in this field?

lynnjr05:Great story! While there is not an abundance of errors, if you need an editor I'd love to work with you! (No charge) for a few chapters until you are satisfied with my work. Thank you again for the Novel!
Reg_LXIXLv2

I would be writing my noval so was wondering about it

lynnjr05:Great story! While there is not an abundance of errors, if you need an editor I'd love to work with you! (No charge) for a few chapters until you are satisfied with my work. Thank you again for the Novel!
Tahmid_AhmedLv12

Honestly this novel is really enjoyable though the story seems a bit fast paced but then again it has it's own good points.

JoshsidheLv15

So I was intially prepares for this to be a rip off of “I never run out of Mana”. Based off the first chapter it definitely is not, plus the quality is much better than that novel. I look forward to reading this one and I’ll leave an actual review when I do.

RottenPotatoLv13

Make it harem

Adui:Haha not a harem per se, but he does play around. There will be a future main girl that won't appear for quite a while though
Ashura_YamiLv4

Hey author can you please remove that ****ty hero talk with Cohen Anderson. What responsibility is the mc even talking about? He didn't feel anything at all so what's that all about. Also, he is too stupid for infinite mana.

Adui:A few ***** themes will be implied in the story with very little romance is all I can say ^.^
AduiAuthor

Reworded some of the wording of those chapters ^.^

Ashura_Yami:Hey author can you please remove that ****ty hero talk with Cohen Anderson. What responsibility is the mc even talking about? He didn't feel anything at all so what's that all about. Also, he is too stupid for infinite mana.
TruffyLv4

Best to keep the romance element as insignificant to the story as possible (at most as a bonus feature), since it leads to nothing but trouble (lowers the overall quality of the work) most of the time for non-romance based series.

Adui:A few ***** themes will be implied in the story with very little romance is all I can say ^.^
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AduiAuthor

So it has been five months since I began writing this novel, and here is an updated review answering some of the many questions I come across. Of course, first and foremost is the story itself: Noah Osmont is an average guy in his 20s with no superhuman brain or genius-level IQ, and he receives the gift of Infinite Mana in a world facing an apocalypse, a world that is filled with Dungeons that routinely need to be cleared or they will explode with monsters. He learns more about his gift as he starts off his adventure as a Hunter, much of his time filled with blood-pumping battles as he spams spectacular Skills on unsuspecting Dungeon Bosses. This adventure continues as he becomes stronger, learns to become smarter, and uncovers the mystery behind his Infinite Mana, as well as get tangled with the major powers of his world. This fast-paced adventure quickly moves forward as even more mysteries are unraveled- Who initiated the apocalypse on their world? How many more worlds are out there facing the same thing? Why exactly are Emperor Penguins so arrogant? Which world's cuisine is actually the best? The adventure will be long and exciting, with an ending nowhere in sight as we uncover more mysteries about the worlds around us, and the Ancient Powers that move behind the scenes... Q- Will there be a harem? A-Well, yes, a mini harem at most, with only two or at maximum three Female Leads. Q- Will the MC actually get smarter? Yes- He's a normal guy learning about everything firsthand and trying to improve, not a Webnovel reader equipped with immense knowledge of what can and should happen in the future of a story, and the exact correct ways to react to it. He will eventually become more pragmatic and careful as ruthlessness slowly see** in, without him becoming a cold-blooded murderer. Q- Just how OP will the MC become? A- Very. There is no limit to OPness Q- Anything else I should know before I start binging? A- It's a fast-paced novel with no heaven rending beauties described for an entire chapter, filled with action and powerful Skills and Abilities that only expand as time goes. Enjoy the ride, and a big thank you goes towards the readers who have supported and enjoyed the novel all this time ^.^

TrueGodOfExpLv6
MadAuthorLv1

i describe the book in one sentence, something out of a teenager fantasy, some random loser get a cheat and became a god,the plot of over 99% of the books, there is no weight in the story, there is no weight in any of the characters, the characters only have 3 jobs in the book,first provided mc with a op to face slap them,2 be smashed by mc and increase his power,3 be amazed by the action of the mc,there is literally no other purpose for any of the mcs,the mc is a hypocrite,he has a problem with Villain's because they wanted to kill him but want to destroy them because they are bad(makes you wonder why only bad guy's wants mc dead)the only reason he is fighting them is because of power but he continually came up with some righteous bullshit to justify his action, there is no weight in any of his decisions,he doesn't face any consequences for his actions, all he cares is power,in other word the entire world revolve around mc(which is a sign of a bad story)(any one who is with mc,is good guy,and any one who fight with the mc is a bad guy),power system is meaning less,why bother care about any ability he has when a new one will replace literally 2 chapter away,bruce lee said i am not afraid of a man who knew 1000 technique i am afraid of a man who knew one skill but has mastered it,this is exact opposite of the mc,overall a very disappointing book,a cheap story created from smashing together some random ideas in a very 2d and lifeless book,i suggests you go and read books like lordofmysteries and reverend insanity to learn how write,

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