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TheUnseenMountTai
TheUnseenMountTaiLv143yr
2022-01-20 00:46

I'm just writing this review because of the annoying update stability..... okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal Anyways: Some grammatical errors. But way better than average. Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value. Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels. Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.

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TheUnseenMountTai
TheUnseenMountTaiLv14

Update: Just unlocked the chapter in which HotIce explained that he was sick....... guess what that makes me? a hint: the women of the MC love it

CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv12

Hello, since you read the work, could you answer some questions, please? Well, if you can, the questions are as follows: is there ntr in the work? (I hope not), is there Yuri in the work? (I hope not), is there a yandere? Does MC really love girls? Or does he just use them and discard them? and how many girls are in the harem... if you could answer I would appreciate it! :D and forgive me for my bad English...

_Just_MJ
_Just_MJLv15

there Are i think 12 now, ať the start mc looked likes he has just using them but Aš a part of character development he started to be more interested in each one. the rest, f dont know what it means so sorry. Can't help you there

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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.

no_life
no_lifeLv5
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