i found this really fun at first. mc seemed fun even though he wasnt smart he was written charismatic. he was an underground fighter but he still had certain principles. unfortunately author writes in the chinese writing style where rape is excused. now if this was a minor incident i would have looked over it but in this particular scene mc rapes a chick right after it. made me so disappointed and disgusted.
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LIKEyou literally did though. by saying that when the drug wore off she didn't resist. thats like saying that because a woman doesnt resist means it isnt rape. your whole way of going about it was wrong. and he should feel some kind of guilt. but no he goes on to raping her half a minute later. he still hasnt consent.
HotIce:I don't understand, excused? where did I write that? the AI overstepped his authorities and drugged the Mc with an intention to help. I never justified the rape.
also, the mc is not righteous, he did whatever he felt right. rape is not good and he never planned to do that, but he did because of the drug, he went along the way because they already did it anyway.
Riassuba:you literally did though. by saying that when the drug wore off she didn't resist. thats like saying that because a woman doesnt resist means it isnt rape. your whole way of going about it was wrong. and he should feel some kind of guilt. but no he goes on to raping her half a minute later. he still hasnt consent.
you wrote mc to be VERY against rape. his ex girlfriend even died because of suicide after she was raped. your way of excusing this whole thing is the problem.
HotIce:also, the mc is not righteous, he did whatever he felt right. rape is not good and he never planned to do that, but he did because of the drug, he went along the way because they already did it anyway.
very against rape? no, it's because his girlfriend was raped and he was angry, everyone angry if that happened to them. if it was another's gf, the mc won't care, lol. I never excused the rape action but tried to explain the mc's train of thoughts. he did it because of the drug, now he did it, so what is he supposed to do? feel sorry? he did but did not show it or else it will break his character. he's an ex-thug, he's rough, he's not a gentleman. alright, that's the best explanation I can give, more it will be a spoiler or it was a spoiler?
Riassuba:you wrote mc to be VERY against rape. his ex girlfriend even died because of suicide after she was raped. your way of excusing this whole thing is the problem.
thats not what i was saying. you saying that il forgetting the mcs ability is pointing towards that youre using it as an argument. so if his ability makes it so girl will feel addiction after *** with him, it makes it okay to rape em?
HotIce:it's not an ability to hypnotize, are we in the same page?
but i have a problem with him taking the excuse of being drugged and then not feeling sorry, and then even raping her again right after. it wouldn't break character. it would make character. i saw him as a man of a bit more princip. plus just because youre a thug and do illegal stuff doesnt automatically make you okay with rape. at least not in the rest of the world. but him not being sorry and just raping her an extra time just fkin made me disgusted. I only find this in Chinese-style written novels, its like the outlook of that style is that rape "isnt as bad"
HotIce:very against rape? no, it's because his girlfriend was raped and he was angry, everyone angry if that happened to them. if it was another's gf, the mc won't care, lol. I never excused the rape action but tried to explain the mc's train of thoughts. he did it because of the drug, now he did it, so what is he supposed to do? feel sorry? he did but did not show it or else it will break his character. he's an ex-thug, he's rough, he's not a gentleman. alright, that's the best explanation I can give, more it will be a spoiler or it was a spoiler?
just tried to explain not to argue. Both were drugged, so it's not completely rape. I don't try to defend or justify the mc's action. are you talking about the second intercourse or the first one after the drug wears off? if you are talking about the second one, is it really rape? Rape is a type of sexual assault usually involving sexual intercourse or other forms of sexual penetration carried out against a person without that person's consent. The act may be carried out by physical force, coercion, abuse of authority, or against a person who is incapable of giving valid consent, such as one who is unconscious, incapacitated, has an intellectual disability, or is below the legal age of consent. none above fit the situation the mc was in. I will explain the situation crudely, the girl has tried the mc's magnificent P and she is addicted. her mouth says no but her body says yes, it's shameful to admit she wants it again to the man she just met. and lastly, if you said that from the start that you don't like the mc's action or the scene or the plot but not the Author tried to justify the mc's action, I will not try to explain everything like this. I mean I can't force you to continue to read if you don't like it, it's your taste that does not fit with the story which I can't do anything with. I tried to explain because you misunderstood something. also, I will not change anything that I have written (the plot, scene, or mc's past action).
Riassuba:but i have a problem with him taking the excuse of being drugged and then not feeling sorry, and then even raping her again right after. it wouldn't break character. it would make character. i saw him as a man of a bit more princip. plus just because youre a thug and do illegal stuff doesnt automatically make you okay with rape. at least not in the rest of the world. but him not being sorry and just raping her an extra time just fkin made me disgusted. I only find this in Chinese-style written novels, its like the outlook of that style is that rape "isnt as bad"
her mind says no but her body says yes??? lmao thats still rape. she just woke up from getting drug raped (i know the drugs only worked for like 15 min) and mc forces himself upon her again. that is rape. now because he has an ability she stops resisting. but does that make it okay?
HotIce:just tried to explain not to argue. Both were drugged, so it's not completely rape. I don't try to defend or justify the mc's action. are you talking about the second intercourse or the first one after the drug wears off? if you are talking about the second one, is it really rape? Rape is a type of sexual assault usually involving sexual intercourse or other forms of sexual penetration carried out against a person without that person's consent. The act may be carried out by physical force, coercion, abuse of authority, or against a person who is incapable of giving valid consent, such as one who is unconscious, incapacitated, has an intellectual disability, or is below the legal age of consent. none above fit the situation the mc was in. I will explain the situation crudely, the girl has tried the mc's magnificent P and she is addicted. her mouth says no but her body says yes, it's shameful to admit she wants it again to the man she just met. and lastly, if you said that from the start that you don't like the mc's action or the scene or the plot but not the Author tried to justify the mc's action, I will not try to explain everything like this. I mean I can't force you to continue to read if you don't like it, it's your taste that does not fit with the story which I can't do anything with. I tried to explain because you misunderstood something. also, I will not change anything that I have written (the plot, scene, or mc's past action).
bro, that's how the ability working. to be honest, the thing all I have said is useless. in the end, you will just throw it back at me with, "It's disgusting!" "should not be like this" and so. you refuse to accept that the fact the mc's ability is a drug itself. I thought you misunderstood something so I tried to explain it. but if you don't like the story, just say so, all ur claims above are not true. in the end, you just don't like what the mc did. the girl basically wanted it as well so she did not resist, there's no way the girl would admit it openly yes I want to do it again as it will make her appear like a slut. I did my best to explain everything behind the action, just trying to clear the misunderstanding which is actually not a misunderstanding with the hope to make you stay to read. but if you don't like it I can understand. I can't make a story that everyone likes. good luck with your journey of reading and thanks for trying my story.
Riassuba:her mind says no but her body says yes??? lmao thats still rape. she just woke up from getting drug raped (i know the drugs only worked for like 15 min) and mc forces himself upon her again. that is rape. now because he has an ability she stops resisting. but does that make it okay?
This is most incel like thread i have ever read you need a reality check dude
HotIce:bro, that's how the ability working. to be honest, the thing all I have said is useless. in the end, you will just throw it back at me with, "It's disgusting!" "should not be like this" and so. you refuse to accept that the fact the mc's ability is a drug itself. I thought you misunderstood something so I tried to explain it. but if you don't like the story, just say so, all ur claims above are not true. in the end, you just don't like what the mc did. the girl basically wanted it as well so she did not resist, there's no way the girl would admit it openly yes I want to do it again as it will make her appear like a slut. I did my best to explain everything behind the action, just trying to clear the misunderstanding which is actually not a misunderstanding with the hope to make you stay to read. but if you don't like it I can understand. I can't make a story that everyone likes. good luck with your journey of reading and thanks for trying my story.
No hate but reading this thread and the way you defend the premise in your novel comes of ‘incel-ish’ The way you described rape is how many of the incel community would. Idk im just an outsider Reading comments
HotIce:also, this a fiction, you should stop comparing fiction to reality. the system, magic, zombies don't exist in reality.