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HotIceAuthor4yr
2020-04-18 23:13

A shameless review from the author ^.^ hell why not? ^.^ hmm, talking about the story, I can't tell you much about that. The story is set in Apocalyptic world, with LitRPG as the main theme, and using power system of Knight & Magic. that's all, curious? Then why are you still reading my review!

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RobertBossLv4

Lemons?

HotIceAuthor

Durian?

RobertBoss:Lemons?
RobertBossLv4

Rambutan?

RobertBossLv4

Nah, but really...Lemons?

HotIce:Durian?
Nikhil_ChandLv4

No updates?

Aung_Myint_Myat_4407Lv1

Come on author you have to work hard to release more chapters....I can't get enough chapter at all ...It's so interesting ....Make more chapters!!!!!!

Drunken_TavernLv11

How's the grammar ?

HotIceAuthor

?

Drunken_Tavern:How's the grammar ?
R3INZLv10

Baru lg nih ? Yg BoA udh tamat belum bro ?

R3INZLv10

Baru lg nih ? Yg BoA udh tamat belum bro ?

HotIceAuthor

udah complete yg BoA.

R3INZ:Baru lg nih ? Yg BoA udh tamat belum bro ?
Jhonathon_LeeLv3

Wouldve been perfect with r-18

Jhonathon_LeeLv3

Also god tier author for no premium

daoist_KoOlAiDLv14

is it harem

HotIce:udah complete yg BoA.
HotIceAuthor

yes

daoist_KoOlAiD:is it harem
R3INZLv10

owh mantab dah, udh lama gk baca lg, klupaan di library hahaha...

HotIce:udah complete yg BoA.
SleayLv14

hey author this is ur fan here asking if u can plz don't drop this novel and to continue this novel

HotIce:yes
ZeroSilverLv2

Why not you post more???? We need more!!!!!

Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

AHHHHHHHHH I DON'T KNOW WHY I EVEN CARE NOW... PLEASE WHY IS THE MC A BIT ON THE SLOW SIDE IN THIS NOVEL ALSO JUST LIKE BATTLE OF ASERCION WAHHHHH PLEASE AUTHOR IN BOTH THE STORY AND PLOT IS GOOD BUT MC WHY CAN'T HE BE A GENIUS OR ATLEAST ABOVE AVERAGE INTELLIGENT

IncubusImmortalLv15

How privilege works? I unlocked A-tier privilege but I can't read anymore even chapters are updated. It stopped at 245/252. Please can u explain?

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HotIceAuthor

some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.

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