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HotIceAuthor4yr
2020-11-25 20:48

some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.

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Ancient_EgyptianLv13

so will be there any progress with any of the women around him?

HotIceAuthor

yes, time will tell ^.^

Ancient_Egyptian:so will be there any progress with any of the women around him?
Tenku_KunLv10

why is the MC randomly called Heero?

HotIceAuthor

I keep mixing up my other's novel mc to this one, sorry about that. I thought I already fixed it. which chapter?

Tenku_Kun:why is the MC randomly called Heero?
Samhain666Lv15

there's average intelligence, then there's your MC that's as bad as a retarded monkey, like seriously the whole wooden chest thing, ok so he was in a mini game, beat the mini game, of course there's going to be rewards like really and there was even prompts for it, and he remembered the level ups but not the rewards, my point has been made... thank you and good night.

HotIceAuthor

hah... He never played a game. please put that one in mind. oh, there's one particular game he played, don't know if you notice that. so he doesn't understand the mechanism behind the game, no notification is telling the chest is the reward. so I don't understand what you complained about, being cautious means a retard?

Samhain666:there's average intelligence, then there's your MC that's as bad as a retarded monkey, like seriously the whole wooden chest thing, ok so he was in a mini game, beat the mini game, of course there's going to be rewards like really and there was even prompts for it, and he remembered the level ups but not the rewards, my point has been made... thank you and good night.
Samhain666Lv15

really you don't remember your own novel, it say he is REWARDED with levels 1 level 9 chest and so on, and honestly the second time he beat a mini game, he got 2 level 9 chests and a level 8 one, but all you told us was he got 3 potions from one and a sword from the level 8 one, what happened to the second level 9 chest? I'm not saying the novel is bad, I'm actually enjoying it, all I'm trying to say is there is some inconsistency, as for him being a retarded monkey, I'll apologize for that, he isn't the smartest but he's tolerable, and I enjoy he's personality.

HotIce:hah... He never played a game. please put that one in mind. oh, there's one particular game he played, don't know if you notice that. so he doesn't understand the mechanism behind the game, no notification is telling the chest is the reward. so I don't understand what you complained about, being cautious means a retard?
HotIceAuthor

bro, please put urself in the shoe of mc who never played the game not the otherwise, and suddenly a chest appeared in front of him. feeling suspicious or cautious over something absurd like that is normal, at least for me it's normal. unless he repeated the same thing when the second chest from the second mini-game, then you can call him a retard. but he does not. and yes, the reward is only a potion and sword.

HotIceAuthor

replied, check the comment above, forget to click reply

Samhain666:really you don't remember your own novel, it say he is REWARDED with levels 1 level 9 chest and so on, and honestly the second time he beat a mini game, he got 2 level 9 chests and a level 8 one, but all you told us was he got 3 potions from one and a sword from the level 8 one, what happened to the second level 9 chest? I'm not saying the novel is bad, I'm actually enjoying it, all I'm trying to say is there is some inconsistency, as for him being a retarded monkey, I'll apologize for that, he isn't the smartest but he's tolerable, and I enjoy he's personality.
Samhain666Lv15

he may not have played any games, but come on it said reward, but anyways I apologized to that and yes he got 3 potions and a sword, still didn't say about the 3rd chest? or did that one magically vanish? anyways I am enjoying the novel I was just trying to point out the inconsistencies so your aware of them, cause I want the novel to continue.

HotIce:bro, please put urself in the shoe of mc who never played the game not the otherwise, and suddenly a chest appeared in front of him. feeling suspicious or cautious over something absurd like that is normal, at least for me it's normal. unless he repeated the same thing when the second chest from the second mini-game, then you can call him a retard. but he does not. and yes, the reward is only a potion and sword.
HotIceAuthor

there are only two, two participants so two chests. did I specifically mention 3 chests?

Samhain666:he may not have played any games, but come on it said reward, but anyways I apologized to that and yes he got 3 potions and a sword, still didn't say about the 3rd chest? or did that one magically vanish? anyways I am enjoying the novel I was just trying to point out the inconsistencies so your aware of them, cause I want the novel to continue.
HotIceAuthor

my bad, it's only 2, I will fix it

Samhain666:he may not have played any games, but come on it said reward, but anyways I apologized to that and yes he got 3 potions and a sword, still didn't say about the 3rd chest? or did that one magically vanish? anyways I am enjoying the novel I was just trying to point out the inconsistencies so your aware of them, cause I want the novel to continue.
Samhain666Lv15

I believe it said 2 level 9 and 1 level 8, but I could be the way it was wrote, and you ment 2 cheats 1-9 and 1-8 lol

HotIce:my bad, it's only 2, I will fix it
Samhain666Lv15

could also be my bad and the way I read it was wrong

HotIce:my bad, it's only 2, I will fix it
Samhain666Lv15

nope I went back and reread it, it says 2 lol 9 and 1 lol 8 lol

HotIce:my bad, it's only 2, I will fix it
YoungSavage_1404Lv2

idk about the other people but I really enjoyed the reading you presented to use.

HotIceAuthor

thanks

YoungSavage_1404:idk about the other people but I really enjoyed the reading you presented to use.
YoungSavage_1404Lv2

Np

HotIce:thanks
OtherworldlyLizardLv3

Sure, the mc is just average he is NOT dumb ok guys?

HotIceAuthor

did you delete your previous comment? no wonder I can reply to it. I am laughing actually, the logic is absurd. but let's break down one by one, Logical Thinking. Realistically, what happened to the current world is not logical. zombie appeared next to you in the middle of the night. is it logical? you can see a transparent screen that shows your name. is it logical? bruh, you may read a lot of isekai stories and played a lot of rpg games, but the mc does not. so calling him dumb because you know something the mc does not know, it's not logical at all. based on this, all kids and babies that just born are dumb. we all born as dumb, that's your logic. seven sins is practically explained everything about human nature. so, we don't need to break this down, it's common knowledge unless you don't know about the seven sins. so a chest appeared out of nowhere, people would show two natural reactions, curiosity and cautious. in this case, Mc is more cautious rather than curious because he lacks of the knowledge of the chest.

OtherworldlyLizard:Sure, the mc is just average he is NOT dumb ok guys?
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