I really enjoy this lol. Mc is dumb but in the funny way lol. I dont know about his talent is it working? I mean author said he has Charm and Charisma talent? But i read all the way to 30 and do not see any women charmed by him
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LIKECharm and charisma doesn't only account to picking up girls. It can be used for a higher chance of convincing someone to do this or that, it would be normal for some people to be charmed by him in a sexual way but not everyone would be like it. You don't see people in real life being all smitten with someone, it's just not realistic.
it's not a bad story or exceptional .. I feel like it's missing an integral element .. hmm charm and panache that makes the story pop 🤔 and reels you in so that you refuse to put it down. .. but take this comment as a grain of salt.. your not writing for me so just do what makes ya happy .. I am still talking it 😃
BTW my ideals do not conform to a specified standard as each person on this planet has there own perception of every word or ideology ect.. so don't be offended please I mean no disrespect just voicing it as I how to help you help me have your world explode in my head. I don't know about others but when I get into a good book after a bit of reading the world melts away and it's like a movie in my head. books that are a bit lacking for me are just words with no substance. sigh I don't think I explained to my own satisfaction but that's all have a nice day. btw I have read over 1500 books a year as I have a weak body and illness so I still want to thank you for your efforts and work!!!
eh, this is exactly like me when reading books.
Bain_H3llSink:BTW my ideals do not conform to a specified standard as each person on this planet has there own perception of every word or ideology ect.. so don't be offended please I mean no disrespect just voicing it as I how to help you help me have your world explode in my head. I don't know about others but when I get into a good book after a bit of reading the world melts away and it's like a movie in my head. books that are a bit lacking for me are just words with no substance. sigh I don't think I explained to my own satisfaction but that's all have a nice day. btw I have read over 1500 books a year as I have a weak body and illness so I still want to thank you for your efforts and work!!!