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invayne
invayneAuthor5yr
2020-01-16 11:33

Okay, I am shameless I know! But I wanted to let everyone know my own thoughts on this novel. This is my first time writing this genre so hopefully, I do it right! So any input my readers can give me is always appreciated. Anyway the story for Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy will be an entertaining ride. I hope you all enjoy Misaki's adventures through Eternal Phantasy. Give it a read and let me know your thoughts by leaving a comment or a review. Thanks for reading!

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SilentByakko
SilentByakkoLv15

I, for one, am very excited to read this story! I've recently discovered some of your other works, and I really enjoyed them. Also, I can't help but hope for a little yuri action, even if it is not from our FL, but I'm gonna be happy with anything, I'm sure!

Razorbackdragon
RazorbackdragonLv4

You have everything to make fame a literal nightmare for this girl she lives in a 1LDk by herself and people already know her name and where she lives approximately and all this is without fame getting to her head.

OhShizle
OhShizleLv5

You’re doing great so far 👍🏻 but when you show her stats you could find a better organization for them. And when you change the stats don’t show the whole status sheet.

Aoi_Tenshi
Aoi_TenshiLv14

I love everything. But I do agree, I think the stats should just show the ones that were newly added or recently upgraded.

ZetaV
ZetaVLv14

Yeah I love it everything about it and hope that the romance is yuri and it looks like there could be a yuri harem (only saying this since I’m currently in chapter 38 and have not catched up yet). But I already can’t wait to find out what happens next and I hope that you continue working on this. One thing that sucks is that I don’t have a lot of money or I would have used it to donate, or on passes as I currently can only get passes for free.

AurelLor
AurelLorLv5

There is only one question here . Is this a yuri novel or mc is not a lesbien ?

Doxombre
DoxombreLv4

We're you able to find out if this is yuri or not? Im haven't read it yet and im curious, spoiler is fine.

ZetaV:Yeah I love it everything about it and hope that the romance is yuri and it looks like there could be a yuri harem (only saying this since I’m currently in chapter 38 and have not catched up yet). But I already can’t wait to find out what happens next and I hope that you continue working on this. One thing that sucks is that I don’t have a lot of money or I would have used it to donate, or on passes as I currently can only get passes for free.
ZetaV
ZetaVLv14

It is yuri but not in the way that I expected with how the Mc no longer cares for her best friend after what she did and the best friend does regret. But the Mc does have a wife so it is indeed yuri.

Doxombre:We're you able to find out if this is yuri or not? Im haven't read it yet and im curious, spoiler is fine.
Doxombre
DoxombreLv4

I see, I was quite hesitant on whether to read this or not. Since for some reason my brain dislikes female main character having a guy lover, unless they are perfectly in match with another which is quite rare to find. Thanks for the heads up.

K1tten
K1ttenLv4

Don’t worry it’s great

AurelLor
AurelLorLv5

Looks like we have same brain :D

Doxombre:I see, I was quite hesitant on whether to read this or not. Since for some reason my brain dislikes female main character having a guy lover, unless they are perfectly in match with another which is quite rare to find. Thanks for the heads up.
Trap_Mocha
Trap_MochaLv2

I found more people like me!! Yayy! ... Seriously though, why do our brains do this?!

AurelLor:Looks like we have same brain :D
AurelLor
AurelLorLv5

Probably we just dont like the male lead . But biggest reason is the power of yuri is too stong to even consider a male lead for mc : D

Trap_Mocha:I found more people like me!! Yayy! ... Seriously though, why do our brains do this?!
Spejs
SpejsLv5

Who knew that demon lord is its own separate race? You live, you learn...

ImperialFayMonarch
ImperialFayMonarchLv15

I know the feeling..

ZetaV:Yeah I love it everything about it and hope that the romance is yuri and it looks like there could be a yuri harem (only saying this since I’m currently in chapter 38 and have not catched up yet). But I already can’t wait to find out what happens next and I hope that you continue working on this. One thing that sucks is that I don’t have a lot of money or I would have used it to donate, or on passes as I currently can only get passes for free.
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Same thought...

AurelLor:Probably we just dont like the male lead . But biggest reason is the power of yuri is too stong to even consider a male lead for mc : D
RinCCa
RinCCaLv2

This might be weird but why does she have multiple wives but its not harem genre what I dont get it

Archie_Henderson
Archie_HendersonLv11

Since this "merges" Ah Chun and Phantasia Knight, can anybody suggest how far through them you can best understand this, getting any Easter eggs and without any spoilers?

invayne
invayneAuthor

Read Phantasia first then Ah Chun then Full dive.

Archie_Henderson:Since this "merges" Ah Chun and Phantasia Knight, can anybody suggest how far through them you can best understand this, getting any Easter eggs and without any spoilers?
Archie_Henderson
Archie_HendersonLv11

Thanks

invayne:Read Phantasia first then Ah Chun then Full dive.
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Whitemist
WhitemistLv5

Honestly everything before chapter 68 is amazing the plot is interesting the characters are interesting and the world building isn't bad either however let me list some of the things after chapter 80 that personally I don't like mind you I have only read to chapter 128 though. BEWARE SPOILERS . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Most of the main characters are how do I say... corrupted? Basically their mentality is forcefully shifted to be closer to a member of their race with the main character being a demon lord this is a drastic change. It is technically still character "development" but it is more degradation than development. Oh some characters seemingly change track and personality at almost random times sometimes with reason sometimes not. * The system changes from the RPG stats to a rank and range system with evolutionary criteria yes the system is completely changed with no explanation why. * There is practically no world building as in none at all past a certain point that isn't to say there is none but the characters and system change so quickly that any world building that is done can't keep up. * The romantic relations between the characters are arbitrary they don't need to be there and most of them so far haven't gone anywhere at the start the interactions aren't bad but post then the characters get set up with each other by the author this is while the main character is to busy with *spoiler* to even think about romance oh and the author sets up a love interest for the MC who 1 is a boy and 2 she has known for barely a few days at most even though the author made a joke about that kind of development before chapter 60 also misunderstanding of monster customs ends up in MC's marriage to a cat girl who is way stronger than her for about 3 chapters before friend who had crush on MC blows up over it (even though she seemingly gave up on her crush and apparently went after someone else) MC is mind broken and then is turned almost fully into a demon lord mentally. (she does apparently retain a small amount of her previous persona which the author does do a good job of showing.) Oh! Did I mention that this could be harem? Is it still harem if it's the demon "queen" and the harem members are girls? I say could be but around chapter 128 the MC technically accepts a new romantic interest even though she already had the accidentally married cat girl also and I quote here removing most of the sentence because spoilers "Us Monsters normally have many wives" this is said by the MC's... right hand? Sister? Potential harem member? Ok I think I'm done as I said this is a great book but I don't like all of it remember though this review is only covering chapters 1 to 128 it could be better or worse from this point on

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