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King_FrostLv124yr
2020-04-03 11:07

This is clearly a Romance with Virtual Reality(VR) elements and not VR with some romance. It is 2 different things and I was not ready for it but it is not too bad if you can overlook a frustrating and annoying character and a poor and unbalanced VR world. There are some good characters but there is one that just kill the story for me and stops me from continuing. Too annoying and her existence is a nuisance and bring only some negative. Sigh.. I am just at chapter 42 though so the Author might have chance something, I do not know. I love the MC though. Great job on the relationship too with her BF. The author doesn't know much about gaming as it is clearly basic system and with some seriously poor decision-making skills and attributes wise. It is a clearly unbalanced game with many plotholes in it. Not much new in the VR genre which leads me to my next point; A bit boring. Its slow. Slice of life but It is too lacking so It is just boring. Or the pacing is off like in one day she becomes good enough in 4 different martial arts to be able to create her own techniques.So yeah, slowly paced and not any protagonist in view so we don't really know where we go. Thumbs up for the good writting though. It flows well and there is not much mistakes but English is my second language. All in all, it does not merit its high score but it is not too bad if you can overlook some super annoying character and an unbalanced gaming world which unfortunately, I couldn't.

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Immortal_Panda
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When you said BF are you referring to boyfriend or best friend?

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