Seud

A- : 90, 91, 92, 93, 94. A : 95. A+ : 96, 97, 98, 99, 100, 100+ (Extra Credit).

She’s basically just a pink haired Hermione Granger.

[Cringe comment referencing Fate]

He bet* He would bet*

MC Dies. The End.

I think the real question here is why was your power out so long that you had to wash clothes by hand?

Seems the editor is too busy making stupid comments to do their job properly. Shame.

I don’t know, but clearly he is still failing. You absolutely couldn’t have been looking at your keyboard when you typed that. You butchered that sentence horribly.

You need to work on these run-on sentences. Learn to write concisely, this kind of reads like word vomit. When this happens I imagine the protagonist either speaking or thinking as fast as he can. It’s almost like Hermione, in Philosopher’s Stone, when she mentions all the books Harry is in.

No, it wouldn’t be cool.