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Poraemon
PoraemonLv65yr
2020-03-27 19:56

A kingdom building novel that written purely on author's imagination with little or no researching and logical thinking. MC'S 260 IQ gives me some thought that I might have over 9000 IQ myself. He knows nothing. He did loads of stupid, naive and illogical thing without consequences followed. Other characters are bad too, no dimension at all. The technologies are meh and mess up. The technologies development in another world can be different, and the differences must have logical reason to them. The land without a known natural resources is one of the biggest city in a kingdom. That city is old enough for farmers to plant crops until the soil is not fertile anymore, but secret mines are never run out. They feed millions of their citizen by growing crop without using any farming tool or fertilizer at all, how?

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PaperbackWriter
PaperbackWriterLv13

Author needs more research. That's what I read so far in the reviews

SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3

any romance?

PaperbackWriter:Author needs more research. That's what I read so far in the reviews
BlueCold
BlueColdLv1

ye it was kinda fast. the mc married the girl at around chap 30

SageDaoist4:any romance?
SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3

ok.. that's what I wanna know..gotta read it Today.

BlueCold:ye it was kinda fast. the mc married the girl at around chap 30
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overlord_man
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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.

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