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Ganoush
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2019-12-25 23:40

Very, very confusing plotline, many spelling mistakes in the chapters forcing you to re-read something thinking that you were just being stupid. The chapters jump from being a medieval society to refining oil in about 10 chapters and within the next few chapters having diggers and producing industrial piping and whatnot. The kingdom building aspect of this novel is alright and has some well-thought foundation building for a modern city.

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PaperbackWriter
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Hey there, Seems you might be looking for an alternative novel of the same genre. Just a heads up. If you're into no-system, non OP MC with lots of side characters, a slow kingdom building based on fiction and realistic locations and events (almost) storyline set in the 15th century medieval England then click the small magnifier and look for 'Til Kingdom Comes — The Banished Prince. It's not a old novel nor it is a new one. It had a kick start in WPC #94, got the Top 5 award and what we really need is more exposure to those who would like to take a peek at the novel and add this in their library. 2 chapters release daily. Stockpiled till mid March 2020. Constant daily updates ensuring smooth storyline. Hope it piques your interests. Cheers and God Bless.

Ganoush
GanoushLv13

Thank you I'll give it a go

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AsianLadyBoy
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i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.

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