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Ayman97
Ayman97Lv44yr
2019-12-10 14:04

the story is wish fulfillment it isnt realistic foer medieval world and have many characters with no depth or personality ____________________

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PaperbackWriter
PaperbackWriterLv13

Hey guys, Just a heads up. If you're into no-system, non OP MC with lots of side characters, a slow kingdom building based on fiction and realistic locations and events (almost) storyline set in the 15th century medieval England then click the small magnifier and look for 'Til Kingdom Comes — The Banished Prince. It's not a old novel nor it is a new one. It had a kick start in WPC #94, got the Top 5 award and what we really need is more exposure to those who would like to take a peek at the novel. 2 chapters release daily. Stockpiled till mid March 2020. Constant daily updates ensuring smooth storyline. Hope it perks your interests. Cheers and God Bless.

Reg_LXIX
Reg_LXIXLv2

Hey will the mc get powerful or just powerful due to the kingdom? Nad is there magic there?

Valven
ValvenLv6

Mc is practically OP. That’s technology wise though. Just imagine GATE anime. Guns in a world of swords :|

Reg_LXIX:Hey will the mc get powerful or just powerful due to the kingdom? Nad is there magic there?
_Bonk
_BonkLv11

I agree that the characters has no depth, yeah the readers will surely lose interest, but dont expect realism in FANTASY WEBnovels ffs, the author can write anything he/she wanted it to be, be it his/her wish fulfillment

_Bonk
_BonkLv11

You fool, its very disturbing "how real" the MC represented himself as "successful electrical engineer", in Chp. 2 when a voice asked the mc if he wanted to bind the system into himself, the mc immediately permitted it without asking what the system is...oh my, oh my, how very real successful engineer A real successful engineer is very, very attentive to details

_Bonk:I agree that the characters has no depth, yeah the readers will surely lose interest, but dont expect realism in FANTASY WEBnovels ffs, the author can write anything he/she wanted it to be, be it his/her wish fulfillment
Tasear
TasearLv13

This review is spot on.

frelvic
frelvicLv3

True true!!

frelvic
frelvicLv3

True true!!

Primordious_Law
Primordious_LawLv11

Yeah I dont think if you died and woke up a banished prince you would ask questions to a "system" like really? That's your reason for him not a engineer?Dude ffs

_Bonk:You fool, its very disturbing "how real" the MC represented himself as "successful electrical engineer", in Chp. 2 when a voice asked the mc if he wanted to bind the system into himself, the mc immediately permitted it without asking what the system is...oh my, oh my, how very real successful engineer A real successful engineer is very, very attentive to details
Primordious_Law
Primordious_LawLv11

Also realistic? Dude he can move a gold mine from across the globe or teleport across the whole godd amn world if he wants ...how realistic do you think this book will be? He was sent by the supposed "Gods" to spread technology and peace across the universe.What the F u c K kind of realism do you want? It's not like he does everything in a day's time.It takes time.Reasonable amount of time. He knows exactly what to do and what to avoid.He doesn't need to make humanity's mistakes.He has perfect memory and a strong a s s body due to his system and he has time capsule.The point is He can have the exact instructions on how to make something...every part every chemical used everything...he knows how to make so it isn't weird if he makes goddamn plastic in 10th century if he has people who are willing to listen to him without killing him. Also character depth can be cultivated if it wasnt there(which the author has). Also the dudes in 1000's wont talk about philosophy or the world because they dont know people can have deep talks them(civilizations like Romans or Greeks are different dont speak of them). I mean their main problems are survival, food and shelter. And they admire and abhor nobles and knights that's all. That's all the goddamn character you can find in a dude back a 1000 years ago in the context of this book. Sure the author needs more nuance in his characters but that is built with time.You dont build a nuanced character in a chapter or 2. NOT when you have so many characters to focus on. So only reviews if you have read atleast 30 chapters. It's not fair to author if you read 5 or 6 chapters and write a biased review.

Primordious_Law
Primordious_LawLv11

Though that thing he did with manure was incredibly stupid. Like it all happened in a day...that was stupid I agree.

1shot1kill
1shot1killLv2

I think the author who wrote is stupid

Primordious_Law:Though that thing he did with manure was incredibly stupid. Like it all happened in a day...that was stupid I agree.
Kaitoxp
KaitoxpLv4

Boom😏 quite a hard one ...so it means not really good to read ?

1shot1kill:I think the author who wrote is stupid
Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

is this harem

Alexander_Vlaescu
Alexander_VlaescuLv3

A lot of technology stuff that happen , happen too fast. Rome wasn't build in a single night . Also all the federation and peace treaty stuff is a bit bullshit. Like by the time nukes and similar weapons are introduced no piece of paper can prevent war. Especially when MC leaves that world and goes to the next one. For that to work you would need one nation with overwhelming power. If you have a nation like that , what is the point of the rest of the nations to exist.

Aw11
Aw11Lv3

I'm extremely disappointed and irritated by the translation, I'm on chapter 539 and It looks like I'll have to drop yet another novel because of the horrendous translation. I mean you can make some mistakes, but to do so to the point of not understanding multiple chapters. example. (Hearing one of their so-called lease tall ah** about them, all 3 men felt their hearts burn in rage. How far these people turn their backs on them like that?) what is this supposed to mean??? Does anyone know if there is another translator doing this novel?

Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

Build mecha army. And that will be the eye opener

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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv12

i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.

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