the story is wish fulfillment it isnt realistic foer medieval world and have many characters with no depth or personality ____________________
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You fool, its very disturbing "how real" the MC represented himself as "successful electrical engineer", in Chp. 2 when a voice asked the mc if he wanted to bind the system into himself, the mc immediately permitted it without asking what the system is...oh my, oh my, how very real successful engineer A real successful engineer is very, very attentive to details
_Bonk:I agree that the characters has no depth, yeah the readers will surely lose interest, but dont expect realism in FANTASY WEBnovels ffs, the author can write anything he/she wanted it to be, be it his/her wish fulfillment
Yeah I dont think if you died and woke up a banished prince you would ask questions to a "system" like really? That's your reason for him not a engineer?Dude ffs
_Bonk:You fool, its very disturbing "how real" the MC represented himself as "successful electrical engineer", in Chp. 2 when a voice asked the mc if he wanted to bind the system into himself, the mc immediately permitted it without asking what the system is...oh my, oh my, how very real successful engineer A real successful engineer is very, very attentive to details
Also realistic? Dude he can move a gold mine from across the globe or teleport across the whole godd amn world if he wants ...how realistic do you think this book will be? He was sent by the supposed "Gods" to spread technology and peace across the universe.What the F u c K kind of realism do you want? It's not like he does everything in a day's time.It takes time.Reasonable amount of time. He knows exactly what to do and what to avoid.He doesn't need to make humanity's mistakes.He has perfect memory and a strong a s s body due to his system and he has time capsule.The point is He can have the exact instructions on how to make something...every part every chemical used everything...he knows how to make so it isn't weird if he makes goddamn plastic in 10th century if he has people who are willing to listen to him without killing him. Also character depth can be cultivated if it wasnt there(which the author has). Also the dudes in 1000's wont talk about philosophy or the world because they dont know people can have deep talks them(civilizations like Romans or Greeks are different dont speak of them). I mean their main problems are survival, food and shelter. And they admire and abhor nobles and knights that's all. That's all the goddamn character you can find in a dude back a 1000 years ago in the context of this book. Sure the author needs more nuance in his characters but that is built with time.You dont build a nuanced character in a chapter or 2. NOT when you have so many characters to focus on. So only reviews if you have read atleast 30 chapters. It's not fair to author if you read 5 or 6 chapters and write a biased review.
A lot of technology stuff that happen , happen too fast. Rome wasn't build in a single night . Also all the federation and peace treaty stuff is a bit bullshit. Like by the time nukes and similar weapons are introduced no piece of paper can prevent war. Especially when MC leaves that world and goes to the next one. For that to work you would need one nation with overwhelming power. If you have a nation like that , what is the point of the rest of the nations to exist.
I'm extremely disappointed and irritated by the translation, I'm on chapter 539 and It looks like I'll have to drop yet another novel because of the horrendous translation. I mean you can make some mistakes, but to do so to the point of not understanding multiple chapters. example. (Hearing one of their so-called lease tall ah** about them, all 3 men felt their hearts burn in rage. How far these people turn their backs on them like that?) what is this supposed to mean??? Does anyone know if there is another translator doing this novel?