i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.
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You can literally skip around 70 chapters and still know how the main story is going. When your paying for filler chapters it says the enjoyment out of the story. There’s soo much wrong with this story but it really has a few good parts. Just the author doesn’t care
there is some good parts in it, but the fact that u need to skip 50 chapters to get to the good parts is what makes this novel bad( or one of the many things). This novel is quantity over quality, the author turns his brain off and just wrights. But its hard for us to turn our brains off and just read. I cant do it to an extent, but i cant turn it off all the way to read this, i just cant.
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Don't wprry. You're not alone. I practically read it once a month just to see if the story and writing quality gets better but everytime, I prove to myself that this novel is absolute garbage. I don't even feel that I missed alot of chapters after missing out on so many every month lol
