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newthings
newthingsLv65yr
2019-11-07 03:43

i liked everything about this novel except 'dense mc' because most of the novels used dense mcs so it became boring and gets irritating, may be ill continue reading when it reaches 50+ chapters

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lumydee
lumydeeAuthor

Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍

00Zero
00ZeroLv14

same

newthings
newthingsLv6

will he become less dense?😁😁

lumydee:Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍
Lorelynf
LorelynfLv6

Dense? Don't like dense mc. So this is not worth to read?

Lorelynf
LorelynfLv6

Dense? Don't like dense mc. So this is not worth to read?

newthings
newthingsLv6

well he wont know why a girl blushes, so i think mc is same as any japanese mc

Lorelynf:Dense? Don't like dense mc. So this is not worth to read?
Lorelynf
LorelynfLv6

Bad news. Jap MC is so bad.

newthings:well he wont know why a girl blushes, so i think mc is same as any japanese mc
newthings
newthingsLv6

will he be ok in the future, or still have no idea why a girl blushes

lumydee:Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍
SamStrike_
SamStrike_Lv3

To be honest, it seems to be getting worse as the story goes on..

newthings:will he be ok in the future, or still have no idea why a girl blushes
Sphook
SphookLv10

Yeah. A dense MC is a big reason for me to drop novels.. hate that trope

DanZ
DanZLv6

Well im gonna wait for more chapters and review before reading this LN then. Not a fan of dense mc.

nitpick
nitpickLv3

DENSE MC IS BIG NO ! . WHOEVER PERSON THINK DENSE MC IS CUTE UR BRAIN IS DISABLED. ANY WRITER MAKE HIS/HER MC DENSE I'LL CURSE THEIR FINGERS HAD PROBLEM SO THEY STOP WRITING THIS NONSENSE AGAIN !! . THANKS IN ADVANCE BRO, I CAN SAVE MY TIME

HeartRend
HeartRendLv6

But about the dense MC. Does it ever get improved? i.e. does the MC ever get cured from his denseness?

lumydee:Dont worry we will get the 50😍😍
skybird
skybirdLv10

There is no "dense MC" ***SPOILERS**** the mc marries the girl he likes in just a few chapters.

Nyanodesu
NyanodesuLv13

Yeah, as soon as I saw the dense mc tag I immediately wanted out. Not even going to bother reading this because of that disgusting, filthy tag.

PaperbackWriter
PaperbackWriterLv13

Hiya mate, Just a heads up. If you're into no-system, non OP MC with lots of side characters, a slow kingdom building based on fiction and realistic locations and events (almost) storyline set in the 15th century medieval England then click the small magnifier and look for 'Til Kingdom Comes — The Banished Prince. It's not a old novel nor it is a new one. It had a kick start in WPC #94, got the Top 5 award and what we really need is more exposure to those who would like to take a peek at the novel. 2 chapters release daily. Stockpiled till mid March 2020. Constant daily updates ensuring smooth storyline. Hope it perks your interests. Cheers and God Bless.

SamStrike_:To be honest, it seems to be getting worse as the story goes on..
PaperbackWriter
PaperbackWriterLv13

Good Day, Just a heads up. If you're into no-system, non OP MC with lots of side characters, a slow kingdom building based on fiction and realistic locations and events (almost) storyline set in the 15th century medieval England then click the small magnifier and look for 'Til Kingdom Comes — The Banished Prince. It's not a old novel nor it is a new one. It had a kick start in WPC #94, got the Top 5 award and what we really need is more exposure to those who would like to take a peek at the novel. 2 chapters release daily. Stockpiled till mid March 2020. Constant daily updates ensuring smooth storyline. Hope it perks your interests. Cheers and God Bless.

Nyanodesu:Yeah, as soon as I saw the dense mc tag I immediately wanted out. Not even going to bother reading this because of that disgusting, filthy tag.
Godiva_Lovecraft
Godiva_LovecraftLv2

Please don't advertise your novel.

PaperbackWriter:Good Day, Just a heads up. If you're into no-system, non OP MC with lots of side characters, a slow kingdom building based on fiction and realistic locations and events (almost) storyline set in the 15th century medieval England then click the small magnifier and look for 'Til Kingdom Comes — The Banished Prince. It's not a old novel nor it is a new one. It had a kick start in WPC #94, got the Top 5 award and what we really need is more exposure to those who would like to take a peek at the novel. 2 chapters release daily. Stockpiled till mid March 2020. Constant daily updates ensuring smooth storyline. Hope it perks your interests. Cheers and God Bless.
Niveus_VenerableR9
Niveus_VenerableR9Lv14

Altough I am also s!ck of dense mc but calling it disgusting...can they be worse than a brainless d!ckhead b*stard of a mc that only knows how think with their d!ck?

Nyanodesu:Yeah, as soon as I saw the dense mc tag I immediately wanted out. Not even going to bother reading this because of that disgusting, filthy tag.
Nyanodesu
NyanodesuLv13

Yes, at least mc's who think with their dicks give me some good smut to read. Dense mc's don't have any such redeeming qualities. Although, if you're talking about protagonists who think with their dicks but are also too pussy to fulfill their desires, then no, those virgins are even worse than dense protagonists.

Niveus_VenerableR9:Altough I am also s!ck of dense mc but calling it disgusting...can they be worse than a brainless d!ckhead b*stard of a mc that only knows how think with their d!ck?
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AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.

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CrimsonWolfAuthor · Fantasy
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