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Sakib
SakibLv65yr
2019-08-30 16:45

Mc have some mental problem i think. Human is social animal. It is the law of human nature. So how can you say the stories mc is regular Human transmigrated. Mc don’t have friend. I Don't think he has any feelings. Humans have feeling man that’s why we call ourselves human.

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Sakib
SakibLv6

Overall its good story.

HolyJoker
HolyJokerAuthor

Later I might do a chapter which explains how he became so. Plus he doesn't trust the people here after all even your own child could kill you like itachi did his parents he didn't side with his family he sided with the village. If the character was put in that position to kill his own family, one he loved he would be a double agent and kill all the leaders and councilman and if it came to it he might even destroy the village just to save his family after all he is very selfish. SPOILER ON HIS FIRST LIFE AFTER THIS. He had a mother and a brother he loved very much, his life was going good untill he got hit by a car. Plus he is not going to love someone new into his life like his mother just because she birthed him after all he thinks he himself got this rebirth by running away from the hands. He obviously does have some issues because of what happened in his early life. THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW. I aways check coments in the last chapter and reviews after I return from my part time job.

Snipe_Ur_Ass
Snipe_Ur_AssLv14

MC doesn't have feelings ??? Count me in

kukutai123
kukutai123Lv4

'law of human nature' that is so freaking ridiculous, 'social animals' we are sure, but not every human is the same which is also true with every other species, we are all different. and basing his indifferent emotions on an instinct 'everyone is supposed to have' is stupid. especially in the mc's circumstance. fyi he interacts with tsunade appropriately and that can honestly be enough for alot of people. especially true for introverts. why waste his time with the fodder that you know dont care about you, that may have ulterior motives,. he comes from a NINJA VILLAGE which would even betray itself

ThiccnessSickness
ThiccnessSicknessLv3

You come across as the sort of person more suited to ****ty wildly emotional shonen protagonists. Have you considered reading something more your speed instead of complaining?

Zeno
ZenoLv5

In itself, in the hidden leaf there is like a brainwashing that is done since childhood so that they live by the will of fire, that influenced Itachi and more than that he participated since childhood in the war, leaving him marked.

HolyJoker:Later I might do a chapter which explains how he became so. Plus he doesn't trust the people here after all even your own child could kill you like itachi did his parents he didn't side with his family he sided with the village. If the character was put in that position to kill his own family, one he loved he would be a double agent and kill all the leaders and councilman and if it came to it he might even destroy the village just to save his family after all he is very selfish. SPOILER ON HIS FIRST LIFE AFTER THIS. He had a mother and a brother he loved very much, his life was going good untill he got hit by a car. Plus he is not going to love someone new into his life like his mother just because she birthed him after all he thinks he himself got this rebirth by running away from the hands. He obviously does have some issues because of what happened in his early life. THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW. I aways check coments in the last chapter and reviews after I return from my part time job.
Havoc76
Havoc76Lv4

Itachi didn’t side with the village. He sided with the Third Hokage who believed the Uchiha Clan were a hidden danger, which was taught by the Second Hokage. The Will of Fire is just a lie to keep ninjas from acting like selfish ingrates.

HolyJoker:Later I might do a chapter which explains how he became so. Plus he doesn't trust the people here after all even your own child could kill you like itachi did his parents he didn't side with his family he sided with the village. If the character was put in that position to kill his own family, one he loved he would be a double agent and kill all the leaders and councilman and if it came to it he might even destroy the village just to save his family after all he is very selfish. SPOILER ON HIS FIRST LIFE AFTER THIS. He had a mother and a brother he loved very much, his life was going good untill he got hit by a car. Plus he is not going to love someone new into his life like his mother just because she birthed him after all he thinks he himself got this rebirth by running away from the hands. He obviously does have some issues because of what happened in his early life. THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW. I aways check coments in the last chapter and reviews after I return from my part time job.
ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

Then why did you give the story such a high rating?

Sakib
SakibLv6

i did give the story high ratings 3 years ago.So i don't remember why i did that.

ChikinBorger:Then why did you give the story such a high rating?
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