Zeno

So far the story is entertaining, the MC should be able to regenerate his wings, right? Because of his titan regeneration, also shouldn't the MC be invulnerable with the flame lit on his back? Also, I think you got confused saying chakra for demonic energy, you previously mentioned that the Kyubi was a demon, I think an auxiliary chapter is needed to explain the powers, does demonic magical energy invalidate the invulnerability of the Lunarians?

It must be an unaffiliated country, because if not, the admirals would already be there, they should also be the country with the largest number of powerful magicians so that the world government does not destroy them by sending the gorosei, the sacred knights, users, of the titans, Kaido should also be more powerful since he has the confidence to destroy them or did he mean to simply destroy the island? Also, how does the world government not find out about this and should they have spies, finally, and Shanks? His battle with Kaido to kidnap his daughter and the subsequent beating of the MC for impregnating her?

In fact, they couldn't escape because Kaido surely has their Vive Card. First, they would have to recover them. Then, there are Yamato's handcuffs that can explode. Once that's solved, they could go live on a sky island, or create one even higher up!

Let's see, if magic exists, then the haki of armament and observation would no longer be mana, but something like ki or touki (physical energy), magicians have mana, what would be soul power? (having the ability to use this power), if it would be rarer than the conqueror which would be mental power, then there could be chakra (fusion of mental power and physical energy), senjutsu, and something superior being the fusion of everything, that by achieving it you would become a god?! (nika?!!)

Interesting, I imagine that the origin of this power would not be extraterrestrial but rather the experiment of some scientists who wanted to achieve gigantification and add powers of some akuma no mi, until the world government found them, but you should still train Haki, since this is supreme, the excess consumption of resistance is an obvious disadvantage, since otherwise it would be a mythological zoan without weaknesses, although with the return to life this problem could be solved by storing nutrients, there should be an image of the mc with AI

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the lunarian gene is supposed to be dominant, he would have looked better with the typical white hair, he should have used speed mode to get so injured, the one at the end should be a holy knight if he has direct communication with imu, maybe their boss, also why eliminate the lunarian? shouldn't it be more realistic to want to capture him so that vegapunk can continue experimenting? and he escaped and is sinking into the ocean.

without a beard he would look younger

The story is good, but with what was mentioned about how men are treated in Japan, which I believe is something original that you added, wouldn't you be contradicting yourself with what is shown later? (the quick acceptance of girls, etc.), also if they were treated so badly, the reality is that they would go to the other world of their own free will en masse to annoy women greatly in the process, and without men the world would suffer a great setback, so I would recommend editing these parts of the chapter.