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EnderPL
EnderPLLv64yr
2020-06-24 06:10

I tried reading it, I really did. Writing quality is good and there are mistakes but you can ignore them. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5. Story had so much potential but the Mc is just justifying his mental illness and lack of emotion. He thinks he had hard life but he basically is just angry that he wasn’t born rich. He blames the whole world for it but he’s just fake, ungrateful backstabbing bastard. It’s not surprising he had bad life because karma is a *****. Now he again cheats uses people lie and kill so hopefully he will die a miserable death but unfortunately author will not allow it. Author really miserably tried to justify the Mc action like: he doesn’t care about his mother because he killed her child, or he doesn’t care about his teammates and kills them because the world is that way. Plllllleeeeaaaassseee. Such a good story but too dark for me. I hate mentally ill mcs.

Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

HolyJoker
4.7
233 Chs

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HolyJoker
HolyJokerAuthor

I can respect that.... MC truly is evil. That was the 'flow' the novel was going with. 😁👍 P.S: Thx for your honest review

4yr
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EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Yeah if you do a less f up Mc version of the story I’m all yours.

4yr
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Berserk_Asura
Berserk_AsuraLv12

he won't ever do soch a bad thing.

EnderPL:Yeah if you do a less f up Mc version of the story I’m all yours.
4yr
4
Berserk_Asura
Berserk_AsuraLv12

such*

Berserk_Asura:he won't ever do soch a bad thing.
4yr
Whitestair_Ivory
Whitestair_IvoryLv5

Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.

3yr
7
Whitestair_Ivory
Whitestair_IvoryLv5

Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.

3yr
1
EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Bro... review from a year ago... really?

Whitestair_Ivory:Did we read the same story? He was never angry about his life and always knew about the lifes unfairness but he accepts it and strive for more, nothing is perfect for him as perfection is an end and he hates an end, he has an never ending greed and everything is just a stepping stone to achive it. He doesn't act bad because he enjoys it he acts that way because he can gain something from it.
3yr
God_Negro
God_NegroLv2

Are u k?

EnderPL:Bro... review from a year ago... really?
3yr
LightNeyer
LightNeyerLv1

I wouldn't mind the MC being that way as long as he wouldn't justify his actions.

2yr
Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

every one of your fan fiction is stupid sh** about crazy people without brains. go to a psychiatrist.

HolyJoker:I can respect that.... MC truly is evil. That was the 'flow' the novel was going with. 😁👍 P.S: Thx for your honest review
2yr
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ChikinBorger
ChikinBorgerLv4

Sochi

Berserk_Asura:such*
1yr
Daoist452371
Daoist452371Lv14

Ironically this review just made me want to start reading😅

HolyJoker:I can respect that.... MC truly is evil. That was the 'flow' the novel was going with. 😁👍 P.S: Thx for your honest review
1yr
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Haraldi
HaraldiLv14

EnderPL:Bro... review from a year ago... really?
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MegaMacho
MegaMachoLv6

-If you can't read sociopath like, villain and manipulative MC, this novel is not for you- Simply awesome, the character design is really good, even if it's hard to swallow his indifference and ruthlessness sometimes, but I can't stop reading, seeing his growth and decisions in the cursed path to immortality at all costs. Him regaining his humanity a bit just to break it again in the name of immortality.

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HolyJoker
HolyJokerAuthor

Author here English is not my first language sorry if i have made a gramatical mistake. I hope you enjoy the story. I am a new author. So i don't know if this is good. So i hope you like the story . Bye Bye

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JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

Where do I even start with this book? It is simply amazing. This has to be one of my favorite books on this whole website due to its engaging storytelling and character development. This is due to the little to no filler that goes on in this story. The character isn't a mindless psychopath who just slaughters everyone but is just a ruthless character who is very likable. The only bad thing that I can say about this book is that I have already caught up to the latest chapter so I need to wait ;-; 5/5 stars my good sir.

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HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
FluffiestEmperor
FluffiestEmperorLv6

The idea of having the MC perusing immortality is okay, however the MC is borderline stupid in how he acts, "My only goal is perusing IMMORTALITY, and **** everyone and everything", basing the whole MC on only his goal makes him bland and non relatable in any possible way. You cannot see him with any of the OG characters simply because you first thoughts would be how will he **** them, kill them, or manipulate them to advance his "ohh so precious goals".

4yr
Sakib
SakibLv6

Mc have some mental problem i think. Human is social animal. It is the law of human nature. So how can you say the stories mc is regular Human transmigrated. Mc don’t have friend. I Don't think he has any feelings. Humans have feeling man that’s why we call ourselves human.

5yr
DripItachi
DripItachiLv4

Wow.... So many psychopathic readers here.... it makes me wish that all of them could gather on an uninhabited island for a banquet for the League of "Like-minded" Individuals, and suddenly a nuke blasts onto them. Ah. It would be the firework of the century. Simply exquisite.

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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Roarrrrr
RoarrrrrLv5

What can I say... Its just too brutal, at first I thought brutality suppose to be good point it helps to survive pretty soon I realised this guy is borderline lunatic and psychopath or maybe he already is... It feels like MC is leaving a fake life and solutions to any problem is murder, he never even consider that... If you find that he isn't killing someone or everyone it only means currently he ain't strong enough to do that... It seems he wants to gain immortality but he already lost every bit of human affection I don't how to put this in words lets just say he ain't human being anymore... Only word I can describe him is Evil.. He just needs pedophile title then he will surpass orochimaru or you can he resembles Reverend Insanity's MC... I just can't bring myself to root for him.. This review only meants to tell you that what you are getting into so go ahead give it a try you may like it

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