Item: The Love of a Lycan
Rating: 1
Author: RedSonia

RedSoniaLv154yr

2021-05-15 08:51

This story left me in disbelief and it's too bad because it started good and I got hooked up. Unfortunately, Jedrek/Lilac couple was left for the end, and the sour aftertaste of their story overshadowed everything good that happened before that. Jedrek is a werewolf and he should feel the mate bond, look at Lilac like she is his Goddess, and fight for Lilac's affection, yet it turned the other way around. Jedrek was cruel, selfish, and indecisive, thinking only about his first love (aka Serafina), while keeping Lilac in the background. Jedrek killed Lilac when she was a baby (literally), and then he killed Lilac again when he held Seraphina in his arms and acted lovey-dovey right in front of Lilac! And in between those two, he tortured Lilac physically and mentally. What kind of a mate does that? The story would be more satisfying if Jedrek suffered until eternity for what he had done and that he found Lilac after the war happy with a man who knows how to love her, but noooooo.... Jedrek got his happy ending because Lilac forgave him. AGAIN! I mean, Lilac was supposed to be a sassy and powerful guardian angel, yet she ended up being absolutely submissive to the point of allowing Jedrek to return to her after everything he did. As a non-werewolf, Lilac didn't feel the mate bond. Why did she fall in love with her murderer/abuser? Would Jedrek long for Lilac after the war if Serafina didn't die? Why did he realize that Lilac exists only after he lost Serafina? I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated and he announced to everyone that Lilac is his queen. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't and he ended up going to Serafina repeatedly (he is a perfect example of a cheating husband). I don't care if he jumped into a volcano or in outer space, and I don't care if he understood how much he hurt Lilac. It came too late, and nothing can fix the wrongs he did. That said, the first two stories are good.

The Love of a Lycan

jikanyotomare

4.6

1200 Chs

Liked by 61 people

Replies8

Sumaera_SheerazLv15

I felt the same Since Lilac was portayed as strong and independent character, unlike other guardian angles and then at the end of the story the author just puts her as background Or an extra character to explain Jedrek and Serefina love story. It was TRULY vexing to see such a good character be ruined in the end and just exists for the male leads happy ending (silly redemption arc). I also Have been wanting to know if jedreK would have chosen Lilac if Serefina was still alive? Cuz it feels like he chose lilac only becuZ his first love died

3yr

MaesenpaiLv1

Thank you for this. I was about to read the novel. And when I say this I don't mean any disrespect to the author I just can't read books with cheating husbands or someone who goes back to their "other" lover and tries to "kill" the main protagonist.....Excuse me? but I came here to run away from reality to enjoy some good old fantasy with perhaps a simp or Yadere for an ML, not this kind of jerk mf...I mean yes he deserves a miserable ending.

3yr

Bordang11Lv2

Good heads up! I won't bother with this story anymore. Baboosh.

3yr

JesReadinLv15

With that many chapters I had to check comments and appreciate yours so much for saving me from investing in a story where there’s a doormat FL and a cruel ML who also cheats but is forgiven by his partner. Two of my least favourite tropes, guaranteed to tick me off so ty!!

1yr

Valeria_OlubowaleLv1

You don't understand. Speak from another view point. Jedrek was Serefina's first love and vice versa. They had known each other for more than centuries where they had a lovely relationship. Jedrek actually LOVED Serefina. Imagine just disregarding the love you've held for someone for than centuries known to existence all for some mate bond pull. I admit it is not fair to Lilac but she should Jedrek had a life before her.Serefina had sacrificed many things just for her love and all Jedrek did was hurt her. Although some of the blame is still on her because she would have been able to clear misunderstandings with Jedrek before she left the realm but if she had told him she was leaving would he have let her? Look Serefina only being there would have hurt the trio more than it's meant to have and complicated issues further. And as a Royal shifter the King of all Lycanthropes Jedrek was not expected to just bow to his head to a girl he barely knew all because she was his mate.Serefina had done a lot of things to be with Jedrek and they both experienced things Lilac won't be able to with him.Jedrek truly didn't deserve either of them and neither did Serefina or Lilac deserve the hurt they received from Jedrek.But in the end the person who had paid all their dues and was the only one preparing for the war while hiding her pain and successfully planning things out was Serefina and what did she get? not a happy ever but death. At least she is at peace.

1yr

Valeria_OlubowaleLv1

You are indeed right it was not fair for Lilac to be sidelined on the story and seen as a third woman or mistress after she had been presented as an independent and strong guardian angel who has mastered her power. It was truly a waste since she could have been paired with Tordoff in her own happy life after the war rather butting heads in Serefina and Jedrek's love story .

Sumaera_Sheeraz:I felt the same Since Lilac was portayed as strong and independent character, unlike other guardian angles and then at the end of the story the author just puts her as background Or an extra character to explain Jedrek and Serefina love story. It was TRULY vexing to see such a good character be ruined in the end and just exists for the male leads happy ending (silly redemption arc). I also Have been wanting to know if jedreK would have chosen Lilac if Serefina was still alive? Cuz it feels like he chose lilac only becuZ his first love died

1yr

Valeria_OlubowaleLv1

Exactly would he have still chosen Lilac over his first love just because she died. Just like she's a second option, a second choice.

1yr

Tracy_Lim_4076Lv12

sarefina and jdreak had love each other for centuries you can't expect them to unloved each other right away. yes he definitely hurt lilac in the process but I could see his trying his best alr. and what's most important is the both of them really needed the so call closure of their misunderstanding centuries ago so they would be able to let go but they never bother not until the last moment. whem jdreak found out his feelings for lilac he alr try his best to make it up to her and avoding sarefina as much as possible. he only lost it when he found out sarefina real reason for leaving centuries ago although wat he did b4 sarefina die I don't agree but at least both of them had talk and finally able to let go once and for all. and no if sarefina didn't die jdreak won't go bk to her. its obvious tat he likes lilac now it just that jdreak couldn't let go of sarefina with so many unanswered problems between them

1yr

Other Reviews

nayaaLv4

Sweet story between a human and warewolf. Different from usually warewolf stories. Must try to read this novel once. First different from that warewolf mate is human But not a normal one recarnation or guardian angel And warewolf is curse Alfa with no mate.. After centuries he met his mate...a human

5yr

jmo321Lv10

It is very interesting story. Very different from normal warewolf stories Story developed quite well, don't be prejudice Must try to read 3-4 chapter.. Must try

5yr

hello24321Lv10

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5yr

SylviaSmithLv1

Jedrek story is a complete disaster. Firstly the story was about Jedrek/Lilac but the author forget to write about their love story instead she write more about Jedrek/ Serafina and suddenly Serafina died so that Jedrek and Lilac could be together. I mean what kind of rubbish story is this. The author should realise that we now live in modern world where no woman can share her husband with another woman and the way Lilac character has written is very wrong. Through out the book the only thing she is doing is forgave Jedrek wrongdoings and never taking any stand for herself. I regret reading this story.

4yr

Mia_VetrovLv1

Nope, I'm done. The first two stories were good but the third story is not good. If you want to read the romance between Jedrek and Lilac, you've lucked out cause there's simply none in the story. Jedrek character was written so poorly. He never gives the vibe of mature man rather he looks more like a immature teenager who doesn't know what he wants in life. So many times he has betrayed Lilac. Cheating is not only physical sexual contact.The most bitter betrayal is giving false hope to someone whose trying to enter your life with pure intentions. To think I was so excited for read Jedrek/ Lilac story and when I could finally read it, it was complete disappointment.

4yr

Mahmuda_AkhterLv15

I wanted to write a review after reading the book completely. I agree with the people who were not happy how the third book had ended and jow the story plot was constructed. One thing for sure though, first and second book was awesome, no so much Questions were un-answered but the third book was a mess I would say. Well when I started to read the first one, the begining was kind of awesome between Jedrek and Lilac, I liked there argument a lot and interection. I really loved there bickering, infact there was this attraction between them for a short moment. But than somehow Author completely shifted from Jedrek/Lilac’s story to Jedrek/Serefina story. For the begining though, When serefina first appeared in there life, it was okey because we thought Jedrek needs a closure. But I think and I really believe that Author consciously or subconsciously was biased to Serefina/Jedrek, and he put so much interection and detailed intimacy between them, that Lilac/Jedrek story didnt matter anymore. This third book answered all the questions between Jedrek and Serefina’s love life in detail and didnt leave any place to not ask about there love for each other! But when you read the later part after Serefina’s death, It was written in a way that author just decided to kill Serefina so that Jedrek can be with Lilac, because the story is about Jedrek/Lilac from the begining, but author somehow forgot it in the middle. The ending of this book was so premature that you would have this feeling that author didnt know how to untie all the unanswered questions and knots between Lilac & Jedrek, so it was left to be not written!! As a reader, It was really disappointing to have your favorite story to be destroyed just like that. It was really my favorite book until the later half of the third book. Author lost the charm at the end, i dont know why probably because he/she was too biased towards certain cahracter. Instead of being a creator of a beautiful story, Author actually let readers suffer at the end.

4yr

ValinteenaLv14

I liked this book right up until it became emotionally abusive. It was a sweet story with a hint of mystery until all of a sudden we have a new character who is mentally abusing the female lead and is just being allowed to because 'it's for her own good. Sorry; that's wrong. I've been there, done that see what it does to people's minds long term. I cant support this book. It's great till chapter 80. The english is broken, but not quite bad enough to have issued understanding. It really is cool but the characters, though most of them are great, a few are just no. Mental abuse and tough love are not synonymous. There is a huge difference and sereaphine is ridiculous.

5yr

Jayra_MunceyLv11

I love this! But the spelling!!! Its so terrible at times. It makes it extremely hard to read. Not even half way in it and all the wrong spelling is making me hate it and I kinda want to stop reading now. But I will keep on cause the person who wrote it might not understand English well enough or something. Anyway, its a really good book. I've never read one like this yet.

4yr

dollychiplunkarLv12

I gave it 1 star just beacuse the story i was most looking forward to was Lilac and all the pain jedrek put her through was not worth it .it would have Been better if lilac would have been killed off and jedrek and serefina lived in regret.. aTleast it would have made sense🙄🙄🙄 ugh i invested so much time inly to get such an big disappointment and lilac character i thought was strong But after reading i just think she Just lets everyone bully her and step on her moves on with it like it didn’t Matter at all .....SUCH A BIG DISAPPOINTMENT😑😑😑😑😑😑

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