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SylviaSmith
SylviaSmithLv14yr
2021-05-01 19:56

Jedrek story is a complete disaster. Firstly the story was about Jedrek/Lilac but the author forget to write about their love story instead she write more about Jedrek/ Serafina and suddenly Serafina died so that Jedrek and Lilac could be together. I mean what kind of rubbish story is this. The author should realise that we now live in modern world where no woman can share her husband with another woman and the way Lilac character has written is very wrong. Through out the book the only thing she is doing is forgave Jedrek wrongdoings and never taking any stand for herself. I regret reading this story.

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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15

Thanks for voicing exactly how I feel. The ending would make more sense if Serafina was selfish until the end and chose to return. She and Jedrek could stay together and that would help Lilac to break free from her toxic love for Jedrek. I wished that Jedrek found Lilac after the war happy with another man; With a man who would know how to love Lilac and not hurt her. I am very disappointed that Jedrek and Lilac ended up together. I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't. Very disappointing.

Lizbella
LizbellaLv13

Same here

RedSonia:Thanks for voicing exactly how I feel. The ending would make more sense if Serafina was selfish until the end and chose to return. She and Jedrek could stay together and that would help Lilac to break free from her toxic love for Jedrek. I wished that Jedrek found Lilac after the war happy with another man; With a man who would know how to love Lilac and not hurt her. I am very disappointed that Jedrek and Lilac ended up together. I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't. Very disappointing.
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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15

This story left me in disbelief and it's too bad because it started good and I got hooked up. Unfortunately, Jedrek/Lilac couple was left for the end, and the sour aftertaste of their story overshadowed everything good that happened before that. Jedrek is a werewolf and he should feel the mate bond, look at Lilac like she is his Goddess, and fight for Lilac's affection, yet it turned the other way around. Jedrek was cruel, selfish, and indecisive, thinking only about his first love (aka Serafina), while keeping Lilac in the background. Jedrek killed Lilac when she was a baby (literally), and then he killed Lilac again when he held Seraphina in his arms and acted lovey-dovey right in front of Lilac! And in between those two, he tortured Lilac physically and mentally. What kind of a mate does that? The story would be more satisfying if Jedrek suffered until eternity for what he had done and that he found Lilac after the war happy with a man who knows how to love her, but noooooo.... Jedrek got his happy ending because Lilac forgave him. AGAIN! I mean, Lilac was supposed to be a sassy and powerful guardian angel, yet she ended up being absolutely submissive to the point of allowing Jedrek to return to her after everything he did. As a non-werewolf, Lilac didn't feel the mate bond. Why did she fall in love with her murderer/abuser? Would Jedrek long for Lilac after the war if Serafina didn't die? Why did he realize that Lilac exists only after he lost Serafina? I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated and he announced to everyone that Lilac is his queen. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't and he ended up going to Serafina repeatedly (he is a perfect example of a cheating husband). I don't care if he jumped into a volcano or in outer space, and I don't care if he understood how much he hurt Lilac. It came too late, and nothing can fix the wrongs he did. That said, the first two stories are good.

Mahmuda_Akhter
Mahmuda_AkhterLv15

I wanted to write a review after reading the book completely. I agree with the people who were not happy how the third book had ended and jow the story plot was constructed. One thing for sure though, first and second book was awesome, no so much Questions were un-answered but the third book was a mess I would say. Well when I started to read the first one, the begining was kind of awesome between Jedrek and Lilac, I liked there argument a lot and interection. I really loved there bickering, infact there was this attraction between them for a short moment. But than somehow Author completely shifted from Jedrek/Lilac’s story to Jedrek/Serefina story. For the begining though, When serefina first appeared in there life, it was okey because we thought Jedrek needs a closure. But I think and I really believe that Author consciously or subconsciously was biased to Serefina/Jedrek, and he put so much interection and detailed intimacy between them, that Lilac/Jedrek story didnt matter anymore. This third book answered all the questions between Jedrek and Serefina’s love life in detail and didnt leave any place to not ask about there love for each other! But when you read the later part after Serefina’s death, It was written in a way that author just decided to kill Serefina so that Jedrek can be with Lilac, because the story is about Jedrek/Lilac from the begining, but author somehow forgot it in the middle. The ending of this book was so premature that you would have this feeling that author didnt know how to untie all the unanswered questions and knots between Lilac & Jedrek, so it was left to be not written!! As a reader, It was really disappointing to have your favorite story to be destroyed just like that. It was really my favorite book until the later half of the third book. Author lost the charm at the end, i dont know why probably because he/she was too biased towards certain cahracter. Instead of being a creator of a beautiful story, Author actually let readers suffer at the end.

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