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dollychiplunkar
dollychiplunkarLv123yr
2021-05-01 15:40

I gave it 1 star just beacuse the story i was most looking forward to was Lilac and all the pain jedrek put her through was not worth it .it would have Been better if lilac would have been killed off and jedrek and serefina lived in regret.. aTleast it would have made sense🙄🙄🙄 ugh i invested so much time inly to get such an big disappointment and lilac character i thought was strong But after reading i just think she Just lets everyone bully her and step on her moves on with it like it didn’t Matter at all .....SUCH A BIG DISAPPOINTMENT😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Robin_Morgan_0032
Robin_Morgan_0032Lv5

This story was great in the first 2 stories, but when it got to Jedric story everything went to heart breaking all the characters I fell in love with went tragically wrong just lost interest after that didnt look forward to the next chapter for 💔 so it didn't matter that once the story ended that there were no more updates to the remaining chapters. all the other novels would open the remaining chapters once they finished the story but not this one so it didn't matter unless you want to continue crying your eyes out.......we have enough death in the real world with covid maybe thats where the author went to so much tragedy 😢💔😔 in the end no near end because I couldn't read the ending even if I wanted to💔😢

aveirojessie17
aveirojessie17Lv11

I just finished the story between Raine and Torak and read two chapters about the other two brothers but didn’t even waist my coins. I was just wondering what happen to Jaine and Torak they were my favourite couple 😊

Robin_Morgan_0032:This story was great in the first 2 stories, but when it got to Jedric story everything went to heart breaking all the characters I fell in love with went tragically wrong just lost interest after that didnt look forward to the next chapter for 💔 so it didn't matter that once the story ended that there were no more updates to the remaining chapters. all the other novels would open the remaining chapters once they finished the story but not this one so it didn't matter unless you want to continue crying your eyes out.......we have enough death in the real world with covid maybe thats where the author went to so much tragedy 😢💔😔 in the end no near end because I couldn't read the ending even if I wanted to💔😢
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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15

This story left me in disbelief and it's too bad because it started good and I got hooked up. Unfortunately, Jedrek/Lilac couple was left for the end, and the sour aftertaste of their story overshadowed everything good that happened before that. Jedrek is a werewolf and he should feel the mate bond, look at Lilac like she is his Goddess, and fight for Lilac's affection, yet it turned the other way around. Jedrek was cruel, selfish, and indecisive, thinking only about his first love (aka Serafina), while keeping Lilac in the background. Jedrek killed Lilac when she was a baby (literally), and then he killed Lilac again when he held Seraphina in his arms and acted lovey-dovey right in front of Lilac! And in between those two, he tortured Lilac physically and mentally. What kind of a mate does that? The story would be more satisfying if Jedrek suffered until eternity for what he had done and that he found Lilac after the war happy with a man who knows how to love her, but noooooo.... Jedrek got his happy ending because Lilac forgave him. AGAIN! I mean, Lilac was supposed to be a sassy and powerful guardian angel, yet she ended up being absolutely submissive to the point of allowing Jedrek to return to her after everything he did. As a non-werewolf, Lilac didn't feel the mate bond. Why did she fall in love with her murderer/abuser? Would Jedrek long for Lilac after the war if Serafina didn't die? Why did he realize that Lilac exists only after he lost Serafina? I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated and he announced to everyone that Lilac is his queen. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't and he ended up going to Serafina repeatedly (he is a perfect example of a cheating husband). I don't care if he jumped into a volcano or in outer space, and I don't care if he understood how much he hurt Lilac. It came too late, and nothing can fix the wrongs he did. That said, the first two stories are good.

Mahmuda_Akhter
Mahmuda_AkhterLv15

I wanted to write a review after reading the book completely. I agree with the people who were not happy how the third book had ended and jow the story plot was constructed. One thing for sure though, first and second book was awesome, no so much Questions were un-answered but the third book was a mess I would say. Well when I started to read the first one, the begining was kind of awesome between Jedrek and Lilac, I liked there argument a lot and interection. I really loved there bickering, infact there was this attraction between them for a short moment. But than somehow Author completely shifted from Jedrek/Lilac’s story to Jedrek/Serefina story. For the begining though, When serefina first appeared in there life, it was okey because we thought Jedrek needs a closure. But I think and I really believe that Author consciously or subconsciously was biased to Serefina/Jedrek, and he put so much interection and detailed intimacy between them, that Lilac/Jedrek story didnt matter anymore. This third book answered all the questions between Jedrek and Serefina’s love life in detail and didnt leave any place to not ask about there love for each other! But when you read the later part after Serefina’s death, It was written in a way that author just decided to kill Serefina so that Jedrek can be with Lilac, because the story is about Jedrek/Lilac from the begining, but author somehow forgot it in the middle. The ending of this book was so premature that you would have this feeling that author didnt know how to untie all the unanswered questions and knots between Lilac & Jedrek, so it was left to be not written!! As a reader, It was really disappointing to have your favorite story to be destroyed just like that. It was really my favorite book until the later half of the third book. Author lost the charm at the end, i dont know why probably because he/she was too biased towards certain cahracter. Instead of being a creator of a beautiful story, Author actually let readers suffer at the end.

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