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Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse piss, horse shits ,dog shits and every shits in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet
Have you read ATG at all? Then reading this is pointless. It's just re-telling everything from canon. Except where Yun Che got by with cunning and skills, this guy uses (or should I say misuses) completely overpowered Quincy abilities. Them being OP isn't what bothers me, it's that he does stupid ass stuff with them. It's just ATG with an idiot MC. I'd give this one a pass.
MC gets the full powers of the quincy king, albeit he is only able to use one shrift a day, but he uses this power for the most inane purposes. First day with the power: creates supercar to impress village cultivators Lame as fk
MC uses Visionary power to make a lambo to flex on villagers, I’m sure that tells you enough about his intelligence, also he doesn’t have memories of ATG, so it feels like you’re reading a ****ty version of ATG since he himself is Yun Che, basically its lame as hell bland boring waste of my time and your time
Okay, so my review to this Novel will be a little bit neutral. So far, the intro and the backstory are very unique and interesting. However, there are a LOT of things that do not make sense in the story afterwards.... 1) Although the character went through hellish events and earned a will of steel, he still should've had some sort of problem with his psyche when reincarnating. However, this does not show. Instead, the character just seems like any other protagonist that wants to be cool... 2) His ability "Visionary" which allows him to create anything and do anything(?) is not explained in detail and instead makes it seem as if the protagonist can just do and create anything... (Basically he has a Broken ability...) 3) This might not bother everyone, but it sure is annoying, is how the Author places the person or characters name before they speak. As if it were a script for a movie. I would suggest doing something else instead. Maybe like, "I'm going to look cool in this lambo, Jean said to himself as he stared at the black Lamborghini" or something similar. 4) My fourth reason for giving this Novel an average rating is because he seems a bit off with one of the characters? This reason may be a little petty, but 😤😤😤 he messed with one of my favorite female characters in ATG. Xia the Frosty Wife 😂 He made her seem so docile when he introduced her to Jean (the protagonist). I mean... he just casually grabs her hand and makes her get in the freaking Lambo. I'm not sure about this... but I don't think her character would allow him to just casually grab her hand.... I mean C'MON she's the Icy Wife!! Not the docile wife... Now then, although I've said a lot. I also believe that this Fan-fic Novel has potential. All the Author needs to do is a few rewrites and this would make an Excellent Fan-fic. :)
Same as the original with a boring twist,different powers a day(useless),did not finish the novel since its sh1t......................... .................
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I like your story but the way you handle with chu yuechan like blasting her clothes for everyone to see her naked figure wasn't my liking at all you can get other kind of revenge but that made me angry also she is my favorite character in atg . So i will review this low to vent my anger.
This is a great redo of the original. I hated the rape and Yun Che abandoning his woman so I stopped reading the original but this one does not have that so it is better in my opinion. Also the MC is majorly OP so if you do not like that then you should not read this. Like all the authors works the updates come out often and the grammar is really good. There were also a lot of crap that went wrong for the MC in the original that does not for this one so it does not feel as messed up. I recommend this if you want something with an OP MC and a good story line. The author has also started to introduce his own elements to the world in the newest chapters so there is content that he makes so it is not just a rewrite.
A Star Wars Fanfic where both the Republic and The Galactic Empire exists at the same time in a Galaxy that is full of constant wars and suffering. Our MC Alexander Hamilton after successfully passing a trial by a Goddess gets put into this war torn Galaxy after he dies from being overworked in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to never work under anybody ever again and to live his life how he wants to. Can he build up his Empire in this New Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he be overwhelmed and succumb to the Darkness.
The student of University is being bored with his current life. With no interest in anything, he, one day finds himself in a delicate situation after stopping the robber on his way back from school that will change his entire until now boring life...Let's see how he will deal with his new life. My English is bad so please be prepared before you will start reading this. The credit for the cover goes to (Allchemic)
When the rifts between worlds opened, countless monsters flooded through, engulfing human cities and plunging the world into chaos. Faced with this apocalyptic crisis, humanity was forced into a new era where every individual had to choose a profession. Nations now compete to cultivate elite practitioners, striving for supremacy in the rankings of alternate world conquests. But as the world teeters on the brink, the first and greatest champion awakens after a million years of slumber—armed with untold buff amassed from his millennia of AFK grinding. The bosses of the otherworld tremble in fear. Global T0-ranked powerhouses bow down, offering their loyalty... [Disclaimer: Here countries fight against each other and this is adapted into a Manhua.] [Schedule: 2 Chapters/Day] ﹌﹌﹌﹌﹌ Raw: 网游:挂机百万年,我醒来成神 Author: 亦晨
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Long ago Monsters of all shapes and sizes ruled the world causing early humans, dwarves and elves to live in only small communities hidden from the world ruled by monsters and beings of darkness alike. But with the creation of those three races gave birth to the gods that they worshipped and seeing the plight of their believers, they gave them the power they needed to fight back against the never ending hordes of monsters around the world. As time passed more and more monster races either died off completely or hid within the Monster Mountain Range, but the three races would have to deal with constant monster stampedes coming from the Monster Lands when their numbers got to high. This went on for centuries, until the humans, who took the brunt of the stampedes had enough and had the one only known as The Great Sage and his 10 disciples to cast a magic that effected the entirety of the monster lands, a curse placed upon all of monster kind. Monsters would have reduced birth rates, all children would be 9 times out of 10 females, and many other curses that varied from monster to monsters, but the weaker monsters had it the worst of all. The Goblins were most effected of all, Male Goblins could no longer get human females pregnant anymore to be used as BroodMothers, and 99 out of 100 pregnancies between goblins gave birth to female goblins, and to make it even worse still the males would always die to impregnate another goblin, effectively bringing the entirety of the goblin race to extinction. Worse still goblin women for the most part we’re great sex slaves for humans as their looks were attractive enough for it, but just barely for human standards it seems. But the god of monsters won’t let his children to go extinct that easily, The last male goblin was born, Blessed by the God of monsters, this marked the beginning of the Greatest Goblin King! ***** cover art made by artist Rapscallion ***** Forewarning later down the line their will be Futa’s added into the mix to give you guys a heads up
Surgeon Guan Ryo Is reborn in Naruto’s world! Enjoy his trip as he uses his knowledge of the story to find his path in this troubled world and eventually stand at the top of Konoha! This novel was translated by SystemTranslation, please visit their site for more chapters. Pat reon: Pat re on . co m/System Translation
I did not own any rights to any of the fantasy world settings but every thing other than that is my own creation. --------------- volume 1: beginning volume 2: treasure island volume 3: high school of the dead volume 4: titanic volume 5: black lagoon volume 6: Mummy, the fruit of grisaia volume 7: sherlock holmes volume 8: jormungand volume 9: pirates of the Caribbean volume 10: naruto volume 11: in time volume 12: survival event volume 13: K project volume 14: Food wars volume 15: attack on titans Volume 16: soul land 1 Why should god and devil fight? Why should good and evil fight? Even if they fight who arranged them fight? Of course I know the answer for this question. Something that is right in front of your eyes but it is so hard to find sigh… ……… This world is too boring for me sigh…. What is this strange world? Why am I in a movie? What this is the real world and the one that I have been living is just a sanctuary. This fantasy world can make every literary work into a different world movies, anime, novels and even games…….. What the hell is all this place….. Hey why should I build my own city here….. Military rank I am not in the army……..
One soul seeking other yet will they find each other in time or will they become bitter enemies? I Don't Own RWBY! Or any work mentioned in this fanfic! The picture is from there: https://cz.pinterest.com/pin/591238257315362510/