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Peace12345
Peace12345Lv55yr
2019-09-27 01:02

This is a great redo of the original. I hated the rape and Yun Che abandoning his woman so I stopped reading the original but this one does not have that so it is better in my opinion. Also the MC is majorly OP so if you do not like that then you should not read this. Like all the authors works the updates come out often and the grammar is really good. There were also a lot of crap that went wrong for the MC in the original that does not for this one so it does not feel as messed up. I recommend this if you want something with an OP MC and a good story line. The author has also started to introduce his own elements to the world in the newest chapters so there is content that he makes so it is not just a rewrite.

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Okay, so my review to this Novel will be a little bit neutral. So far, the intro and the backstory are very unique and interesting. However, there are a LOT of things that do not make sense in the story afterwards.... 1) Although the character went through hellish events and earned a will of steel, he still should've had some sort of problem with his psyche when reincarnating. However, this does not show. Instead, the character just seems like any other protagonist that wants to be cool... 2) His ability "Visionary" which allows him to create anything and do anything(?) is not explained in detail and instead makes it seem as if the protagonist can just do and create anything... (Basically he has a Broken ability...) 3) This might not bother everyone, but it sure is annoying, is how the Author places the person or characters name before they speak. As if it were a script for a movie. I would suggest doing something else instead. Maybe like, "I'm going to look cool in this lambo, Jean said to himself as he stared at the black Lamborghini" or something similar. 4) My fourth reason for giving this Novel an average rating is because he seems a bit off with one of the characters? This reason may be a little petty, but 😤😤😤 he messed with one of my favorite female characters in ATG. Xia the Frosty Wife 😂 He made her seem so docile when he introduced her to Jean (the protagonist). I mean... he just casually grabs her hand and makes her get in the freaking Lambo. I'm not sure about this... but I don't think her character would allow him to just casually grab her hand.... I mean C'MON she's the Icy Wife!! Not the docile wife... Now then, although I've said a lot. I also believe that this Fan-fic Novel has potential. All the Author needs to do is a few rewrites and this would make an Excellent Fan-fic. :)

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