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Ukiru
UkiruLv135yr
2019-06-09 05:11

MC uses Visionary power to make a lambo to flex on villagers, I’m sure that tells you enough about his intelligence, also he doesn’t have memories of ATG, so it feels like you’re reading a ****ty version of ATG since he himself is Yun Che, basically its lame as hell bland boring waste of my time and your time

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voidgods
voidgodsLv4

That was a good summary , this voidgods will definitely not read a cultivation novel that have a s**** Lamborghini in it.

WorldPiercer
WorldPiercerLv14

Flex on villagers💀💀💀💀💀💀

Sandwhich
SandwhichLv4

Hargh.. 5 emeralds for 1 seed

JustAReader3
JustAReader3Lv4

bruh the mc must much be more idiotic than the original sternritter gremmy thoumeaux who is said to have a low IQ level lol

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Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

Okay, so my review to this Novel will be a little bit neutral. So far, the intro and the backstory are very unique and interesting. However, there are a LOT of things that do not make sense in the story afterwards.... 1) Although the character went through hellish events and earned a will of steel, he still should've had some sort of problem with his psyche when reincarnating. However, this does not show. Instead, the character just seems like any other protagonist that wants to be cool... 2) His ability "Visionary" which allows him to create anything and do anything(?) is not explained in detail and instead makes it seem as if the protagonist can just do and create anything... (Basically he has a Broken ability...) 3) This might not bother everyone, but it sure is annoying, is how the Author places the person or characters name before they speak. As if it were a script for a movie. I would suggest doing something else instead. Maybe like, "I'm going to look cool in this lambo, Jean said to himself as he stared at the black Lamborghini" or something similar. 4) My fourth reason for giving this Novel an average rating is because he seems a bit off with one of the characters? This reason may be a little petty, but 😤😤😤 he messed with one of my favorite female characters in ATG. Xia the Frosty Wife 😂 He made her seem so docile when he introduced her to Jean (the protagonist). I mean... he just casually grabs her hand and makes her get in the freaking Lambo. I'm not sure about this... but I don't think her character would allow him to just casually grab her hand.... I mean C'MON she's the Icy Wife!! Not the docile wife... Now then, although I've said a lot. I also believe that this Fan-fic Novel has potential. All the Author needs to do is a few rewrites and this would make an Excellent Fan-fic. :)

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