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MALAKITITI
MALAKITITILv45yr
2019-06-05 11:12

Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse piss, horse shits ,dog shits and every shits in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet

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Pripriri
PripririLv5

LMAO. Beastmode hahahahahahah

Pripriri
PripririLv5

LMAO. Beastmode hahahahahahah

General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

I meant that i won't make him more op than now, if uou want him even more op, like all the schrifts in 1 day, expect either a short story or a drop

K2X32X52
K2X32X52Lv5

Haha

Sondre
SondreLv13

Are you a moron? He can cultivate like a mofo. It's only the first few chapters he can't. Moron.

MALAKITITI
MALAKITITILv4

Do you want my dick that much?

Sondre:Are you a moron? He can cultivate like a mofo. It's only the first few chapters he can't. Moron.
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Child

MALAKITITI:Do you want my dick that much?
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Chenglei
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