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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv65yr
2019-06-04 15:32

MC gets the full powers of the quincy king, albeit he is only able to use one shrift a day, but he uses this power for the most inane purposes. First day with the power: creates supercar to impress village cultivators Lame as fk

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Pripriri
PripririLv5

If I'm the Mc I would try imagining a God that can grant him an infinite wishes😤

General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

But can you really imagine it? He read as many novels as the times an asteroid fell in your zone and he was blind for more than half of his lifetime, he can't imagine many things except what he saw in the first 8 years, and even that was already a big stretch

Pripriri:If I'm the Mc I would try imagining a God that can grant him an infinite wishes😤
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

But can you really imagine it? He read as many novels as the times an asteroid fell in your zone and he was blind for more than half of his lifetime, he can't imagine many things except what he saw in the first 8 years, and even that was already a big stretch

Pripriri:If I'm the Mc I would try imagining a God that can grant him an infinite wishes😤
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

He can't eat pills because his veins are broken, everything that isn't consumed will last 1 day, except for the consequences. Example, if you imagine a spontaneous death, the person will turn back to life. If you imagine a invisibke sword cutting people, only the invisible sword will disappear, the person will be dead.

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Trek
TrekLv6

Yun Che knew how to fix his veins with high level resources, as mc has those memories he can do it too so he can imagine a pill which heals veins like the one in yun ches memory.

General_Paragon:He can't eat pills because his veins are broken, everything that isn't consumed will last 1 day, except for the consequences. Example, if you imagine a spontaneous death, the person will turn back to life. If you imagine a invisibke sword cutting people, only the invisible sword will disappear, the person will be dead.
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

But it would just slightly repair them and open only 3 prpfound entrances, which can't be increased, so jean left that as the last plan since he had the watch

Trek:Yun Che knew how to fix his veins with high level resources, as mc has those memories he can do it too so he can imagine a pill which heals veins like the one in yun ches memory.
Trek
TrekLv6

No, Yun che could open all profound entrances manually, the sky poison pearl just made it easier.

General_Paragon:But it would just slightly repair them and open only 3 prpfound entrances, which can't be increased, so jean left that as the last plan since he had the watch
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Not in half-disabled profound veins, those veins grew with him, so it's almost impossible healing them at the 100%, all the profound entrances should be destroyed, but with the method that YC wanted to use before, only 3 profound entrances and the profound veins would be repaired, giving him a ****ty talent, he can't open something that is completely broken

Trek:No, Yun che could open all profound entrances manually, the sky poison pearl just made it easier.
Trek
TrekLv6

Yun che knew the heavenly profound medicine manual, the universes best medicine manual. He could have made an entire new network for himself, all he would need is resources. He literally said anything can be cured and repaired by him as long as he has resources.

General_Paragon:Not in half-disabled profound veins, those veins grew with him, so it's almost impossible healing them at the 100%, all the profound entrances should be destroyed, but with the method that YC wanted to use before, only 3 profound entrances and the profound veins would be repaired, giving him a ****ty talent, he can't open something that is completely broken
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Yet why didn't he thought about how to fully repair his profound veins in the original novel and thought about getting degraded ones? Even before, he planned to just advance in cultivation just with medicine, which would greatly restrict him instead of finding methods to make new profound veins before he knew about the evil god's divine veins. Besides, he said that his master surpassed him in medicine, yun che memorized the book, but was unable to fully comprehend it.

Trek:Yun che knew the heavenly profound medicine manual, the universes best medicine manual. He could have made an entire new network for himself, all he would need is resources. He literally said anything can be cured and repaired by him as long as he has resources.
Trek
TrekLv6

From what I remember Yun che requested some items like beast core, crystals and some plants from his wife when she went to the snow Asgard, these would allow him to fully heal his cripplied managed network back to 100% No restriction, 100% use and all open profound entrances.

General_Paragon:Yet why didn't he thought about how to fully repair his profound veins in the original novel and thought about getting degraded ones? Even before, he planned to just advance in cultivation just with medicine, which would greatly restrict him instead of finding methods to make new profound veins before he knew about the evil god's divine veins. Besides, he said that his master surpassed him in medicine, yun che memorized the book, but was unable to fully comprehend it.
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Boi, that is exactly the method i was talking about, to partially repair the profound veins, there is no other known methof except that that can repair disabled profound veins, and they would give Yun Che only 3 profound entrances

Trek:From what I remember Yun che requested some items like beast core, crystals and some plants from his wife when she went to the snow Asgard, these would allow him to fully heal his cripplied managed network back to 100% No restriction, 100% use and all open profound entrances.
Trek
TrekLv6

Might be wrong but from my memory, YCs veins were basically scrap, it would have been a full reconstruction. I don't know where you saw the bit about only 3 entrances can be repaired, I don't remember it being like that at all. Either way YC literally said that he can cure any condition no matter what it is there is a medical cure so I am 100% sure with those memories it can be done.

General_Paragon:Boi, that is exactly the method i was talking about, to partially repair the profound veins, there is no other known methof except that that can repair disabled profound veins, and they would give Yun Che only 3 profound entrances
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

Jasmine said that and Yun Che confirmed in his heart

Ero_Usagi
Ero_UsagiLv5

Wait what? I never found **** like that in the original.

General_Paragon:Jasmine said that and Yun Che confirmed in his heart
General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthor

There was

Ero_Usagi:Wait what? I never found **** like that in the original.
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